Tale of the Outlaw (Campaign)

[RockinRaymond]

Hey there HIVE! So recently I've had an itching to get back into modding, and I had an idea...Another campaign where you play as the BAD GUYS. I know this has been done with blizzards Undead Campaigns, but I think there is something a little bit different about playing as a group of evil humans. So in this campaign you play as gang of Bandits called Crimson Slaughter(where my 40k fans at) who are trying to make a name for themselves amidst a time of turmoil in the province of Lawdale. I have whipped up the first mission for anyone who wants to try and any criticism is welcome and encouraged. I know there will probably be some spelling mistakes in there and the victory condition isn't quite working yet but I just wanted to get something up that people can comment on and see if I am heading in the right direction. Any feedback is greatly appreciated!

UPDATE: Victory Conditions work, and I added an ending cinematic