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SpellDragonIcy 1.31 [MUI]

This bundle is marked as useful / simple. Simplicity is bliss, low effort and/or may contain minor bugs.
To do this skill inspired me in the Hitsugaya Bleach.
Give me credit if you use this trigger on your map !!!!!

Keywords:
hitsugaya,icy,Spell,Freeze,Area
Contents

Just another Warcraft III map (Map)

Reviews
12th Dec 2015 IcemanBo: Too long time as NeedsFix. Rejected. Bribe: The triggers need to be posted in tags or else this can't get a proper review. Status: Rejected until updated.

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12th Dec 2015
IcemanBo: Too long time as NeedsFix. Rejected.

Bribe:

The triggers need to be posted in
  • tags or else this can't get a proper review.
  • [b]Status: [color="orange"]Rejected until updated.[/color][/b]
 
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~ HaniBon Review ~

Information

I am not a THW administrator or moderator. I cannot approve or reject your spell/system so it's optional if you want to read this review. You do not have to make the changes that may be listed in my review, they are just tips and ideas. Thank you.
Review

I will review the spell after testing it, checking the object data and triggers. When I am done, I will review the things you have created. I will also comment your description of the spell.

Idea:
4/5 <Good>
Functionality: 1/5 <Not Good - The spell is not as smooth as it CAN be. It leaks on effects and is not MUI (cannot be used by more than 1 player at the same time). I have more information about this in the "How To Solve" part>
Effects: 2.5/5 <OK>
Documentation: 3/5 <OK>
Description: 0/5 <BAD!>
Object Data: 3/5 <OK>

Overall: 14/30 <OK>


Words Translation
This might help you understand what I mean with some words in my review.

"IDEA" - A "Idea" of a spell is sort of the essence of it. If you have a good idea, the spell can be really amazing. There are thousands of spells and systems, and coming up with your own Idea that is New can be hard.

"FUNCTIONALITY" - The "Functionality" is basically how the spell works. Does it work at all? Does it have good triggers? and so on. If you got low points in this section, it might mean that your spell or system have leaks, does not work for multiplayer (MUI) or simply don't work.

"EFFECTS" - Did your spell have good "Special Effects"? Is it smooth? If it was, you got high points here. If it was not very smooth or clean, you might need to work on that.

"DOCUMENTATION" - The documentation are the "Comment" actions in your spell. If you have well placed and written comments that help the users understand your spell, you will get higher points. Remember that everyone is not "Pro" on spell/system creation so they might need a bit help. Using comments to explain your trigger actions, is a good way to do so.

"DESCRIPTION" - This is how you describe your spell. The description must have a complete description of the spell and Trigger tags that shows you spell.
A bad way to do a description is like this:

Spell made by me. It's an, umm well it's a spell that cast a magic axe on a creep and when it hit it, it dies... Sort of... Credits if you use it.
That will get 0 points for sure! Now, a good way to describe your spell, is like this:

Magic Axe.
When using this spell, the caster tosses a magical axe on the target causing the target to instantly die. There are (x) dummies that you will need to copy and (x) spells that uses (x) buffs. Make sure you copy them all to make the spell work.

I have not found a leak in the spell and it works for multiplayer (MUI). Please give credits to me if you use it in your map!
Enjoy!

Triggers:
- Paste your triggers in
  • tags -
  • [/box]
  • "[COLOR=White][B]OBJECT DATA[/B][/COLOR]" - The Object Data are your units. Maybe you have created a dummy, does it have the abilities a dummy should have (invulnerable, locust, no shadow, no food cost etc)? Or the ability icon, is it green or does it work? Does it have the tooltips? If the rating was low, make sure all your abilities, buffs etc have tooltips and that the dummy works as it should!
  • "[COLOR=White][B]OVERALL[/B][/COLOR]" - So, how did the rating go? Did you get high or low score?
  • If you got under 15, you seriously have to fix the spell!
  • [COLOR=White]1-15[/COLOR] - FIX IT OR IT WILL BE REJECTED!
  • [COLOR=White]15-20[/COLOR] - Might be rejected, might not be. Some leaks or such were found.
  • [COLOR=White]20-25[/COLOR] - Will be approved, if not, I have done something wrong with the review.
  • [COLOR=White]25-30[/COLOR] - No doubt, this is approve able and really good!
  • [/hidden][/box]
  • If you want more information about how to improve your spell, PM me.
  • If you have any questions or want to change something in my review, PM me.
  • If you want a new review, PM me.
  • [COLOR=White][B]
  • Thank you for your time and good luck with the triggering![/B][/COLOR]
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Spell leaks and not mui,test map could be better,the sfx of the ice remains for awhile after the spell finishes,fix it and it will be a great spell,about the dragon spinning on the ground after it hits,makes no sense since theres no damage for that.Good luck.
 
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