Short Story '' Windford Champion''

[Moderator]

15:32, 26th Jun 2008
Septimus:

Good Point

[+]

Bad Point

[-] It is too short
[-] Camera moving style is very weird

Overall - 1/5
Rejected

This is too short, I do not think this could be even consider as cinematic.

 

[shaun]

eh?
same mistakes again:

no z-offset for the first camera
the second camera has absolutely no sense
cameras do the rollercoaster - i know u did this on purpose but i dont get why
it is around 45-50seconds long???
i know it's about your windford champion story but why dont u integrate it into a bigger cinematic but do an extra map for it?
bad english
don't you watch your maps after finishing them? i'm serious

overall this map is the result of 30mins of work and not worth the download

sry but please spend time on it or let it be...