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Shadows of Teldrassil- Chapter Two

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Shadows of Teldrassil- Chapter Two (Map)

  1. ForgottenLight

    ForgottenLight

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    Make sure you've watched Part one first, then watch this and tell me what you think. I want some feedback :D
     
  2. Tichonrius

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    how many parts will you do?
    p.s I am downloading the cin right now, ill give you rating/coments/advices when I see it
    edit: was nice,
    Cameras: 4.8/5 hummm nothing to say, they were almost always moving...
    Dialogs: 4/5: they were fast... I couldnĀ“t read some... make them slower next time ;)
    Sounds/Music: 4/5 were nice, but in a part when ullayot was talking to cenarius, the music was always restarting...
    Special Effects: 4.7/5 were nice, specialy on that pararel world
    story: 5/5 nothing to say, its just a great story
    Terrain: 4.8/5 was very nice... abit plain on that place of the training of cenarius...
    Overall:4.5 -- it improved since the first chapter, hope it does on the next one too, I specialy liked the story, this map maked me want to se more =) good job! :)
     
  3. ForgottenLight

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    I'm planning on maybe six parts.

    Sound, when Ulyaoth was talking to Cenarius, yes, that was the same music loop, but a break(if that's what you meant) shouldn't have been hearable.
     
  4. Ralle

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    Very nice, even better than the first part!
    Tichonrius was faster than me, I'd have said the same.

    Perhaps you could improve your terrain a bit, add some more doodads and avoid edges in the terrain. Some more fluent hills would be better, not only rise the terrain at the border of the scene-background, it looks a little too arbitrary (hope this is the right word...).
    The music loop is with short breaks (about 2 seconds long), it's already uch better if you use the "forestmusic" as Sound instead of music and tick "loop" in the variable options. Perhaps you can edit the sound to work more fluently as a loop.

    I have to begin to search for things which aren't perfect... 8)
    This becomes a really nice cinematic series... I'm looking forward to the next part! :wink:
     
  5. Tichonrius

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    yea, couldn't agree more :D
     
  6. ForgottenLight

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    That's weird, when I test it, the 'forestmusic' loops perfectly, with no break.
     
  7. Tichonrius

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    well,I hear it whit no brakes, it's just that we can hear how and when it starts and ends perfectly...
     
  8. Nemesizz

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    It's nice like the first one.

    Still I wonder how you got all that WoW music (I recognise a lot of it, since I play WoW alot :wink: )

    Did you use a MPQ editor or something? (if so, wich one....because the ones I used didn't work very well).

    *edit*
    never mind those musics anymore...I got em all on the WoW soundtrack cd (of the Collectors Edition)
     
  9. ForgottenLight

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    yeah, that's where I got them.

    :arrow:
    Still looking for feedback.
     
  10. PurplePoot

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    Could you please add a description to all of your cinematics?
     
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    See my post in chapter one. This cinematic is amazing. 5/5!!
     
  12. deepstrasz

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    -what happened during those years? Didn't the legion attack?
    -Cenarius is giant Yoda....
    -what's with the green text over green stuff instead of leaving it as a transmission?
    -if the demons brainwashed Kriger, how/why did he remember stuff from before?
    -why are they disappearing like specters?
    -a transcendence in the middle of (hopefully nowhere) an open place where even animals could attack them when vulnerable?
    3/5.