how many parts will you do?
p.s I am downloading the cin right now, ill give you rating/coments/advices when I see it
edit: was nice,
Cameras: 4.8/5 hummm nothing to say, they were almost always moving...
Dialogs: 4/5: they were fast... I couldn´t read some... make them slower next time
Sounds/Music: 4/5 were nice, but in a part when ullayot was talking to cenarius, the music was always restarting...
Special Effects: 4.7/5 were nice, specialy on that pararel world
story: 5/5 nothing to say, its just a great story
Terrain: 4.8/5 was very nice... abit plain on that place of the training of cenarius...
Overall:4.5 -- it improved since the first chapter, hope it does on the next one too, I specialy liked the story, this map maked me want to se more =) good job!