Scattered Sins

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Status : Approve
Condition : Average
Review : 1

Note : The loading screen is completely black, you have forgot to add a mdx file for it. The terrain are carefully set up, which enchance the visual of the cinematic.

The triggering are carefully set up, but you should change the 120 seconds wait before the victory condition would took place.

No voice actor and no background music to enchance the cinematic till the credit part, which make the entire cinematic dull and boring. Sorry to said this, but the starting conversation between the main character and his wife is so dull that it could make me sleep due to the lack of this 2 aspect. The camera usually stay lock with hardly any action over it also is another main factor that make this cinematic doesn't look great.

Sorry to said this, but you should improve the camera and add some music background to it. Currently it was quite dull due to this 3 aspect.

As for now, approve and rating 2/5.

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[Septimus]

Improve the 3 aspect, the 3 aspect make the cinematic too dull even the terrain look good.

 

[Amigurumi]

Hi Yearight, here is my review for your cinematic!

Pro-points:
[+] you have given credits

Neutral-points:
[~] terrain is sometimes good, but some parts are dull
[~] very small houses relating to the indoor scene

Bad-points:
[-] no music (only at credits)
[-] indoor scene needs more camera movements

Overall a short cinematic, which could be improved. You should add music in your cinematic, to make it more fascinating.
I hope my review helps you to improve your cinematic.
I give it a 2.5/5

 

[f0rsAk3n]

Id say this map is lacking ... well quite a few things , ^ allready named some of them , and maybe you can make it that more then 1 person can play
im sorry but in my opionion i give it 1\5

 

[Amigurumi]

and maybe you can make it that more then 1 person can play

It's a cinematic, and a cinematic did not need more than 1 player.

 

[f0rsAk3n]

It's a cinematic, and a cinematic did not need more than 1 player.

What i meant was , if you host it on bnet , other poeple can watch to , i changed my rating to 2 btw

 

[Amigurumi]

What i meant was , if you host it on bnet , other poeple can watch to

Yeah, but you cannot chat when you watch a cinematic, so I think it make no sense to host or join it at bnet.
Okay, more people watch it...

 

[f0rsAk3n]

Ok yeah thats does make sense , lol , but dont expect this map to become famous any time soon

 

[xxdingo93xx]

I like your cinematic..

[+] Good terraining
[+] usage of imported models
[+] Proper credits are given decently
[+] imported credit music (I like your music taste, a dust of hip hop is to hear in there! Yay ^^)
[-] only creditmusic is used, no else
[-] no love in camera work

All in all I will rate this with 3/5. Tell me if the continuation is out, I'd like to see it.

~xxdingo93xx

 

[Yearight]

Thanks for the comments, i will improve this map a bit and then move on making the next map.

And i know the credits run out before the victory, but thats why i added the esc trigger. Just if you wanted to hear the music.

Btw where can i find some wc3'ish music?

 

[deepstrasz]

I liked the idea of betrayal, but what is it with that song at the end? Rick'rolled or something?
2.5/5.