Rysnt11 model gallery

[rysnt11]

rysnt11's Model Gallery All the screeny here is 100% made by me

Please comment, and give suggestion

marine infested marine ghosted fel gaurd armor crypt flyer cyro phoenix chaos space orc with animation of shaman some request from people Devil Of The Heaven chocobo! Fallen one comparison Fallen one (GIF)

Credit

Ampharos_222 For being a great teacher -Peper- For being a great friend and suggester Izanagi for being a animation teacher Champhara Bros For being a great texture animation teacher GhostThruster For his awsome marine skin

 

[-Peper-]

That is too simple particle work. And the wrap is messed.

 

[rysnt11]

Hmm..
The warp is good as it,..
Any suggestion on the wrap?

 

[General Frank]

The warp is messed up, especially on the right arm and the blade. It looks very bad and it either stretches or warps into itself.
I don't know if it is your fault, but I do know that the wrap of this model is pretty difficult.
The particles are kinda very boring. Repetitive.
Overall, judging of the edit, the model is just a wrap-change and removal of some parts. The particles just try stealth these flaws, yet make it look much less pleasing.

 

[rysnt11]

@frankster: thanks, i'll improve them

 

[-Peper-]

If you wanna make some ghost, try different particles together and maybe body with additive filter.

 

[rysnt11]

Actually it's an armor of felguard, i use the theme of durahan, or in other word, moving armor

 

[Orcnet]

the armor needs some more work

 

[rysnt11]

@orcnet: thanks, i'm working on 4 model request right now, so the ghosted felguard armor need to wait...
:'(

 

[dead-man-walking]

Actually it's an armor of felguard, i use the theme of durahan, or in other word, moving armor

Erm, if I may correct you on something... Dullahan is actually a "headless" spirit of Irish origins. "Headless" is in quotation because it do actually have a head, just detached from the rest of the body. So, yeah, this is actually "animated armor" and not a Dullahan. That's pretty far-off.

On the model itself, I must agree that the wraps are messed up in some places, the edge of the lance/spear/halberd/whatsitcalled in particular. The arms and legs also looked awkward from the screenshot.

 

[rysnt11]

In other word, durahan is a moving armor right?
This armor will be used in my aos, it will be a second transformation of malagor the fel guard,
Btw thanks about the wrap issue!

 

[-Peper-]

Durahan/Dullahan is not a moving armor, the head is just detached. So knight body with separate flying head.
Btw the flyer is very messy and unidentifiable.

 

[dead-man-walking]

The flyer seems like some sort of unholy congregation between a crypt lord and a dragonhawk rider. With badly messed up wraps.

 

[rysnt11]

Messed again?
:'(
Work on that takes 6 hour.. (in my noob time, now, i think, i'm a better wrapper)
@peper: well, when i finish them, i wanted to upload them, but seems,i forgotten about that, so he lied down in my hd, btw, i think the wrap isn't messy as the picture show, i'll take some more pic on him

{EDIT}
Updates!
1. added picture to show Crypt Flyer from many angles
2. Added the request from imperialshadow 'the skeletal footman'

 

[NhazUl]

The undead footman turned out quite good with these blood stains. Now maybe you should add some rust.

 

[rysnt11]

How, can i add the rust, any idea?

 

[D a w n]

really, work on your wraps. No matter how great your concepts are, your models will always turn out shit without proper wrapping.

 

[rysnt11]

Some models (dragon hawk rider, rexxar campaign axe) are a pain to be wrapped..
But, i'll try to re wrap them
Thanks!

 

[Nasrudin]

Honestly, I like most of those models and I think you've made a good job so far. Plus, it looks like you're trying your best here.

The first one is nice, although removing parts of the mesh isn't quite a titanic job it looks good, and the felguard animations are probably going to fit very well for a Revenant, considering the original model moves as if its limbs were floating most of the time!
The blade could use some work, I agree on that. And there is maybe something wrong with the right shoulder too, but on the other hand, that kind of detail is too small to be visible ingame except on camera close ups, wich maps won't have, I don't think it's too important.

The cript flyer is an intresting edit too. I admit that I had to stare at it for a while, before figuring out what it was. It has one big issue as of now, wich is the head of the beast, can't really make any sense out of it, no idea where to look for the eyes or mouth, or fangs, or if it's even supposed to have any.
The rest looks alright to me, might perhaps look a bit better if it had bat-like wings, or something like your avatar, but now it's not important, the first thing you should do is make something about the head.

Can't really say anything on the phoenix, the picture is too small.

I don't understand what you were trying to do with the fourth one either, what's with the yellow head? Is it some kind of glass?

The skeleton footman is my favourite, it's really nice that you thought of details such as a broken helm, ribcage and heart, arrows piercing the armour. It all just seems to flow nicely with the texture.
I'm wondering how it looks while animated though, it seems you attached the spear to one arm, an object so big might draw too much attention from the observer if it moves too much, in wich case I'd attach it to the chest, wich moves less. It's only a guess though, I'd have to see it ingame to judge.


All in all, I hope you're going to finish them, don't be discouraged by criticism even if it's harsh: most of the guys around here just can't be arsed to type more than one sentence per post, and you'll have to guess what they were trying to say more often than not, but the majority of them mean well, bar some occasional trolling.

 

[rysnt11]

Harsh critism are good on other side, thanks narsudin
The crypt flyer's beast's head is on this theme 'a blind beast rided by a nerubianish human'
I take a more close up on that beast's head
About the yellowish thingy on the 'head' of that space orc, is a helmet, remember ghost thruster's marine skin?
Btw on the skeletal footman's head there's an axe chooped the helm

And the skeletal footman is one of my customer's request

 

[rysnt11]

Should i relase this model?

This is a jumbo jet, recently i made the bone rotated horizontally, so the particle emmiter would spawn in horizontal postion,
Btw, this model used in game texture

updated

 

[GangSpear]

Wow,it damn cute(It is cute? @@)
i should say it damn cool,release it x)

 

[rysnt11]

Right now i'm fixing the scale, it's too small, did you see the comparison?
Gyphon rider is bigger than the plane
XD

 

[-Grendel]

hmm.. dunno why but in my opinion, the particles makes it look like the plane is damaged and its going to crash. that's just my personal opinion though

 

[rysnt11]

It's jumbo jet, the particles make the jet looks real

But, good opinion

 

[-Peper-]

I agree with ampharos, the particles looked like burning fire, not jet fire.
Other than that, cool.

 

[rysnt11]

so, how do i make jet fire?

 

[-Peper-]

Try to make it more like ray instead of fire. Marine's gunfire is suitable (it's not perfect though) because burning fire are for zeppelins. Though copying it would be messy (you need to make a bone for each plane then billboard it.

 

[rysnt11]

Hmm...
So, what kind of jet is fit to this plane'?

 

[-Peper-]

Maybe make the fire more intense (some fire on jet begin on blue) and thicker

 

[rysnt11]

Okay, i'll make them

 

[Light]

you should include other requests, such as mine(please do seperate them in different hidden BB codes).

 

[rysnt11]

Umm..
Lightofdeath, yours request is too simple to be here, since all i do is delete some part of the skin, and change them into black and white, also the modification on the model is too simple...
Sorry about this...

 

[Light]

i dont get fooled by the making. anyways ur great at making.

 

[rysnt11]

@lightofdeath: thanks!


{EDIT}
updated!

 

[-Peper-]

Woo! Realistic jet fire!
Don't forget too add small fire particle on the tail.

 

[rysnt11]

{25-June-2011 3:20 PM}

thanks!
So, do i need to upload this model after polishing it with final touches ( of course the final product pic will posted here, and only uploaded the model if enough people want me to do so)

{EDIT 1, 25-June-2011 4:38 PM}
@frankster:thanks, and sorry
Thanks for merging the thread
Sorry for too many thread by me

{EDIT 2, 27-June-2011 11:30 AM}
Updated the first post!
See the last hidden tag

{EDIT 3, 29-June-2011 3:35 AM}
I'm back, sorry for my disappearing...

 

[-W3SK3R-]

Nice gallery, the last models is my fav.

 

[rysnt11]

It's hasn't done yet, now i'm working on his body wrap, need something that looks like 'human'

 

[-Peper-]

That one actually looked like Devil Jin from Tekken.

 

[rysnt11]

Wait for it, the demonic form is removed, i hate to search another good geo set to make the devil look 'evil'
Hehe

 

[rysnt11]

Bump..
None see this thread..
T.T

 

[Direfury]

Just work on your basic skills, you'll be able to make models of the same quality much faster. If you keep updating, people keep looking.

As far as your models go now, though, they seem outlandish, and you may need to start skinning to fully realize them. Try your hand at it.

 

[rysnt11]

I can't skinning, i already tried, and fail, bunch of my fail lying in the recycle bins (about 6k or more files that is very ugly)

 

[-Grendel]

I can't skinning, i already tried, and fail, bunch of my fail lying in the recycle bins (about 6k or more files that is very ugly)

yeah its really like that. you try, you fail, you learn from mistakes. you try again and you get better.

 

[rysnt11]

Umm..
Afaik, edison only fail 999 times, not above 6k..
So, i guess, i just can't skin..
T.T

 

[Direfury]

Hey, for every one that said yes, there's a hundred that said no.

You win one, and it's spectacular, you lose the rest and they all pale in comparison to that one, single victory.

 

[rysnt11]

wow, thanks for supporting me to learn skinning

 

[Adiktuz]

the crypt flyer has an awful wrap on my opinion...

 

[rysnt11]

About the wings, yes
Other parts, no