Rpg Human

[Manoo]

Hello folks, here's my rpg model i'm creating it about 1 week. Feel free saying what's good or bad in model.

 

[PROXY]

Isn't this tyrael's model? sorry if I'm wrong, but it looks so similiar...

 

[Manoo]

No it's not thyrael's model, I taked some forms (chest, eyebow) from his model ,his very good skinner and modeler .
Edit: New version, changed skin color, face better quallity (eyes, nose), chest less blured.

 

[xXm0RpH3usXx]

you should definatly add what your work is and what isnt, also if thyrael approves you editing his model.

 

[Manoo]

I didin't edit his model this model is TOTTALY mine. No steal.

 

[Thyrael]

Imitation is the greated compliment, a wise man said long time ago... Indeed this model is very similar to mine. Especially the light brown boxershorts, haircolor and skin color. But I can clearly see, that it is not an edited version of mine.

 

[Manoo]

Ty thyreal, hairs i from wc3 arthas just lot of colloring, boxershorts i will not hide i liked yours but it's more like wow i created.
Edit: By the way what do you think about this model thyrael?

 

[Nasrudin]

Looking good overall, nice detail on the mesh, expecially arms, hands and face. It is slightly weird looking on the torso, it's partly the texture but probably also something with the wrap - not hard to fix anyway.

That said, may I respectfully point out that it's quite far from fitting the warcraft style? If you stray too far from it, your unit may feel out of place in game, rather than just stand out in quality. Have you considered toying a little with proportions, making them look like a little less realistic and more cartoonish?

 

[Orcnet]

It looks so Un-Warcrafish style, it will look good because of the attachments but the human body is just not right, but still its a good model.

 

[GhostThruster]

It looks like a women with manboobs...but the body shape is alright. Hope the anims will work out well.

 

[Manoo]

Nasrudin, about more cartoonish i don't really know, i think realistic looks more natural.

Orcnet, I agree couse my model looks Un-Warcrafish, but that's why people try to make wc3 modes to look less wc3 style and more costum models.

GhostThruster, Heres new change not big but maybe now, he will look more male to you :/.

 

[GhostThruster]

Can you make his nose further away from his lips?

 

[Manoo]

GhostThruster, Here's new version of face, nose further away from his lips and remove smile.
Edit: Remove eye shading couse on mirroring it looked strange.

 

[Nasrudin]

The former eyes looked fine to me, better than the new actually, they are... too opaque, as if he's gotten blind. If you're concerned about mirroring, you can always create two planes for the pupils and put them in front of the eyes, as many blizzard models do (check Jaina's portrait for instance).
Don't worry about the expression too much, it is fairly easy to change it by creating a bone to animate the mouth's corners.

As for the body though, I must say the abs looks strange, firstly they are too large (or the chest's upper half is too thin, you decide) and secondly they are very marked at the centre, only to fade completely toward the pelvis and pectorals, as if he had no muscles there. Though I'm not sure if it's something about the UV map or just the texture.

Still, pretty nice job overall. Can you post the wireframe please?

 

[asdfADRiAN]

I think it has some good potential. If you ask me it has the style that Black_Stan has made back in the years.

Thank you for bringing back this style up once again from the graveyard. Though much is still to be added, I say its a very good start. Have you done any animations for the model?

 

[Manoo]

Nasrudin, Here's model wireframe.

Atmosferic, I haven't done any animations, even model size is not normal, becose now i trying reach best model version.