Rome v1.11

[Moderator]

22:41, 10th Jan 2011
-Kobas-:
Map Status: Rejected
Broken Rules:
(Resources) Presentation, (Resources) Credits
Comment

 

[light bolt30]

Please improve the description; tell us more about the gameplay, add some screenshots, tell us if any game modes, etc. Here's a list of BB Codes for you to use. Also please give credit to each authors resources you've used instead of saying

I used Model from The Hive Workshop so i give Credit to them.

You need to post each persons name down.

 

[-Kobas-]

Terrain look empty, trees and terrain!
Still tiles are epic, finally

 

[Tleno]

erm you could like immprove the description by adding some more practical information, screenshots and changelog. And actual credits.

 

[Eldubs]

Description plays around 35% of the map here on THW. Thats my oppinion why this map should be rejected.

 

[-Kobas-]

Wrong there is rule about description (presentation) and rule about crediting people (credit), because users usually miss both it look like big problem... Also if we add poor looking terrain and bad triggers and memory leaks map can be Rejected! Still if user missed only few things (important), we set map status to Rejected (until updated)

 

[Eldubs]

I said its my oppinion : )

I dont know shit about triggers what makes me not look at the maps triggers NEVER!

 

[-Kobas-]

Well you can know zero about triggers and still give nice reviews, all you need to do is to play map, alone or with friends and see how it look!

Suggestion, suggestions and some more suggestions are all what map maker need!

 

[Eldubs]

I know that suggestions are the important part. But after i started doing massive forum stuff, i pretty much stopped playing. Ofcourse i play from time to time, but not as much as before.

 

[-Kobas-]

Moderation

Rome v1.11
Created by Mageweaver01 ; Uploaded by: Mageweaver01

Review

I checked your map earlier today, can you please fix description (add screenshots colors and so on) and credits (for example that ogre on map center wasn't created by you right). Oh map type is wrong!

Once when you finish with that (easy part) please fix triggers and memory leaks
Example:

• Teleport Left exit
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit enters Left Exit <gen>
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • Unit - Move (Triggering unit) instantly to (Center of Left Entrance 2 <gen>)

This trigger create location (point) leak every time when unit enters Left Exit region...
Here you go example how it can be fixed!

• Teleport Left exit
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit enters Left Exit <gen>
  • Conditions
  • Actions
    • -------- Store point into array variable --------
    • Set TempPoint[1] = (Center of Left Entrance 2 <gen>)
    • -------- ------------------------------- --------
    • -------- move unit to stored point (variable) --------
    • Unit - Move (Triggering unit) instantly to TempPoint[1]
    • -------- ------------------------------- --------
    • -------- we destroy that stored point within variable (variable value) --------
    • Custom script: call RemoveLocation (udg_TempPoint[1])
    • -------- ------------------------------- --------
    • -------- Why array, because you have a lot regions so instead a lot of variables we can just increase it's number -> TempPoint[2],TempPoint[3],... --------

About gameplay:
Well terrain need improvement, custom cliffs can increase it's quality a lot.
But for start adding large number of doodads can fix/improve it!
Add environment doodads (rocks, flowers, shrubs...)
Add special effect doodads (faerie fire looking like doodad...)
Add neutral units (birds, fish...)
Add lightning effect doodads (custom lightning doodads, fire, fog...)

There is no DISBTN Icons (we can see green icons when you press pause for example)
This should be enough for now!

You are big guy, you should be able to find tutorials on this site or on others as well!
Once when you improve this map, update this one send map moderators message and I will unlock thread once again!
Have a nice day!

Broken Rules:
(Resources) Presentation, (Resources) Credits
Thread Cleaned:
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Status: Rejected