Rifleman.BLP

[Moderator]

15:48, 2nd Sep 2008
Dan van Ohllus:
[Rejected]
Skin is too blurry, and most have some repetitive patterns and recolor.

 

[Re8eL]

blizzard strikes again with the alphas I cannot fix that make a part of the model look bad, the striking hammer on the gun cant be removed.

[Fixed]

 

[Lord_Firage]

Here ... I alpha'd out the Black things ....
The Skin is cool but the Beard could be better
and remove the Brown Spot on the Cape ... the brown Spot in the Middle I mean

 

[Hawkwing]

Your skin is lacking borders. You need to make the borders on the edges of things like his shoulders, his cape, etc more visible.

The chest and legs look great. But the beard is a recolour and much too shiny. Well, you went over it with an, appoximatley, 70% opacity brush. I would consider that a recolour.

 

[Re8eL]

Here ... I alpha'd out the Black things ....
The Skin is cool but the Beard could be better
and remove the Brown Spot on the Cape ... the brown Spot in the Middle I mean

your fix made the rifleman's feet alphaed as well

When i have time I'm going to finish/patch up this skin. Pretty busy for a little while tho.

 

[Someguy19]

The beard seems too flashy. Overall, this skin needs more work.
Btw, who randomly voted 5/5?

 

[Devine]

not me >,>
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rofl the idea is nice and the texture looks good but
the beard omfg why RED?
alfa out the leaves at the end of the cape
ow and alpha out anything thats should be alphaed out

 

[FrIkY]

actually beard looks good on wrap (for me) but it's too bright and it seems just like a recolor on the unwrap. And this rifleman kinda looks resembly to this one RiflemanElite
Probably because both of them were looking at this one http://www.intemperance.org/Files/dwarf-1024x.jpg and then made the skin, probably, I don't know

3/5 - it's nice

 

[Re8eL]

Your skin is lacking borders. You need to make the borders on the edges of things like his shoulders, his cape, etc more visible.

The chest and legs look great. But the beard is a recolour and much too shiny. Well, you went over it with an, appoximatley, 70% opacity brush. I would consider that a recolour.

I guess you could call it a kind of recolor, but to recolor it I painted over it with orange(100% brush) and shaded very similar to the beard underneath.

Update: Fixed the alphas with my own

 

[Hawkwing]

Well do not use neon orange. Try a dark shade of red.

 

[madcat2]

The beard look like the original I'd (not meaning its a recolor) I'd like to see it a little different (not needed though).

where you cut the shoulder pads to the cloth the shading is good but it need to be a little bit better, Try a little darker. The face looks the same but darker and different color mixtures. The nose on the face needs more shading alright. The green leaves are blurry try fixing that. The muscles are good just need a touch up shade. I love the gloves but the shoulder pad hangs out some on the model so try casting a shadow down on the glove just a little bit. Also I've love to see you do some free hand on the shirt and pants and gun you left alone.

Also it'd be nice to see you change the beard color to something like hex: ba5822. But this is unneeded if you don't want too.

 

[Hawkwing]

The beard is, if anything, a recolour.

 

[madcat2]

The beard is, if anything, a recolour.

Well I take great effort in looking at skins I looked at the original and this one they have the same details, but there is some added things. So it might be a recolor but it does have some free hand detail in it and that would be enough so we do not call it a full recolor its a part-rcolor it'd wouldn't hold the skin back unless it has more recolor then free hand in the beard But the beard lacks shading and detail in the lower areas so thats why I would like to see it changed up a bit or even repaired by free hand.

 

[Jack_Sparrow93]

looks nice, but I don't like the face...

 

[Hawkwing]

The rules state that the skin must be at least 70%, or 80% (i forgot which), freehanded. The skin is easily that. I'm just pointing out that recolours are ugly and messy.

 

[madcat2]

The rules state that the skin must be at least 70%, or 80% (i forgot which), freehanded. The skin is easily that. I'm just pointing out that recolours are ugly and messy.

75% free hand. And yeah the beard does need to be changed I agree but like I was just saying he doesn't have to if he feels its unneeded.

 

[Avsky]

Man you say you couldn't pull off the chest and legs because they couldn't match that of Blizzard's. Yet you managed to pull of the rope!!?? lol I always though making rope that wraps around armor easily the hardest thing to make. Nice

 

[SuPa-]

The beard.... is neon orange. Please see to changing that

 

[Franklin]

Wow looks pretty awesome.