Patrick

[Moderator]

18:48, 3rd Oct 2008
General Frank:

It doesn't look like Patrick Star at ALL! It's really messy, edgy and the textures is very ugly.

 

[Dakadoon]

sry, this probably doesn't work, i clicked the wrong thing

 

[Fasian_guy]

screenshot 2 small

 

[Direfury]

It's too big!

 

[Zerox]

Um please put a better screen shot.

 

[WAR10K]

i believe D.O.DG. already made a patrick and its a little better actually
3/

 

[Dakadoon]

If he made a Patrick, its not uploded onto Hive

 

[Kazer]

eerm... what is this XD it look like some sort of deformed starfish XD i know its patrick 2/5 he looks a bit deformed
i say a bit i meen alot but i've never modelled before so i can shut up XD

 

[Fasian_guy]

his face is like blank

 

[qbrtux]

I do not really think it looks like patrick, not at all tbh. Change the shape and eyes and you're well on your way.

I mean..

 

[Zerox]

The eyes are too small. Make big white circles for them with his black pupils. And don't foget his eyebrows.

 

[bbfreak]

Wtf!!! Its A Gummi Bear!

 

[Midnight Wolf]

Wtf!!! Its A Gummi Bear!

okay...

 

[Jack_Sparrow93]

It doesn't looks like Patrick... 1.5/5

Make hes eyes bigger and make it look like his head and body is one!

Edit: And the Patrick on this screenshot looks much better... ---> Patrick

 

[modler2]

dude that sucks but keep trying

 

[Lord_T]

It's a start. Change the Event sound from peasant death to something like ogre's, work on his eyes, and texture in general, and get rid of that portrait model. Just give him a camera. I'd give you a 2/5 now, But I'll hold my vote until you make changes.

 

[Screaming_flame]

no good.

 

[Lord_T]

no good.

Make. something. better

At least he's trying to improve the community's resource database. Please tell me what you have done to that effect.

Hmm.. Nada. So please take your nonconstructive criticism elsewhere. We're a community that tries to build on improvement. Not a bunch of noob-stomping elitists who think they're cool because they can shoot someone down in 2 words, which, evidently, isn't far from the full extent of their vocabulary.

 

[Jonacms95]

>.<Looks ugly!Keep trying

 

[Voidwalker]

He looks like a pinhead?

 

[D.O.G.]

i believe D.O.DG. already made a patrick and its a little better actually
3/

Thanks!

If he made a Patrick, its not uploded onto Hive

It isn't on the Hive because it is rejected. But I'm improving it and I'll upload it soon.

It doesn't looks like Patrick... 1.5/5

Make hes eyes bigger and make it look like his head and body is one!

Edit: And the Patrick on this screenshot looks much better... ---> Patrick

It is my patrick on the screenshot!

 

[[K40$]-Spectre]

He looks like a pissed off, deformed and an angular tub of lard.

 

[shaun]

is it possible to give a negative rating?... i so wanna...

EDIT: -10/5

 

[Dakadoon]

I actually did use this picture to base my texture, thnx anyway

 

[Dakadoon]

Edit: And the Patrick on this screenshot looks much better... ---> Patrick

D.O.G. has edited that Patrick to make it way better than mine, but the one in that picture is about just as good - It needed better belly button and his trunks' texture, and also it looked like it was just a Warcraft unit with a replaced textures, wasn't Patrick's shape. Now, however, if you want a good Patrick, go download D.O.G.'s, this is actually my first model EVER!