O`khan pride Island

[PrinceYaser]

Hey, man! Just some reviews:

• The mixing of the tiles is not good, at all! Use a better variation and mix of the tiles. Try to make the mixing of the tiles like what you've done with the top right corner of the map, that road I mean, but with some different tiles (Or not different).
• Those alone rocks in the rivers are not working. They're making the look of the map ugly. Try to put some islands under them and some natural plants around them.
• Most of the map has Sunken Ruins trees. Try to make some tree variation among the Sunken trees.
• This map is natural and it's not a map that have some structures, so try to use natural bridges.
• I can see that you've calculated the shadows. It's a nice point!
• Try to use some more creativity. You can always use some HD waterfalls that falls from every where you want. You can easily make some mountains that there are some waterfalls on top of it. Think about what can you do that makes this map more creative, more beautiful and more natural. Decrease the rivers and increase details of the ground and add some details you think that make the map better such a that mountain I said.
• Most of the beaches or strands are empty. Add some details to them if you don't want to decrease the rivers.
• You can make some beautiful natural constructions by every thing you have in your doodads. Change the Maximum Pitch Angle or Max Roll Angle and make some natural structures that makes the map unique looking. For instance, make some towers with rocks or some natural gates with nature energy upon them. These are very good ideas. Think about some ideas and make some more natural structures. That goes for a great template if you care about!
• I think those Sargeras eyes you've put upon those pillars are not working. I think those overall walls and pillars and every stone structure made by Human are not working for this natural map. Make some natural structures instead of them I think.
• I like that sand tile you used. I think it's suitable.
• No other suggestions.

Overall, I think this map needs work and update. But let's see what Mods say. I rate this map 2.5/5 and +2 rep for the effort.

Just believe yourself to make great maps! (Well, that's my slogan in each review of me)

 

[deepstrasz]

Well, there are wide patches of grass in the south that look a bit ugly because of being a repetitive one tile. You could at least hide the monotony with some doodads (shrubs, bushes, something).

The description needs to be better.

Awaiting Update.

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