ninja3

i submitted all 3 ninja skins cause i dunno what of those is the best...changes at this one...new look of the face and improved battle dress
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THE_END: ..another..ninja...oooh K, approved
Level 3
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Jun 4, 2004
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Its nice to see the Demon Hunter with eyes that look like they belong there. Awesome ninja skin. 5/5
 
Level 13
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there is still that curved X on this chest, you should remove it.

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WTF, WHY DID YOU SUBMITTED 3 NINJAS SKINS WHEN YOU CAN EDIT YOUR OLD ONE?
didnt you noticed that add/UPDATE resources button? making a new one and not editing the old one is veryyy lame!

This one is the best, why are you trying to act smart over it? there is little amount of folds, but there is more i guess. make the folsd bigger, bolder and more visible.
try adding some metal ornements like a belt or what now here and here, the pants looks like, sadly, only recolored.

The ninja in the screenshot is rather useless, we only care about the skin, not how much you can draw comic ninjas in mspaint. mspaint is a great program btw it learns you how to mix colors.

that brown line to the right of his eyes is wtf, what is it doing here, there is no such line on the human, is this the hairline, or his ear? this line is misplaced and unrelated to the face here, scroll it way down or put something else here.

about the face, you should use more of a texture and give fold-like colors, it must be a mask you put over the face, they do have major lightning, add some, there is barely none.

the chest still needs major tweaking, remove that "X" on his chest, it makes it looks like the dress wraped on him like soap or a dress that is 2,5x too small for the person.

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their outfit doesnt not wrap on them, not even for males, they give them some loose clothes to allow fluid movements, not to make them feel tight in their shirts.
your skin is way too tightly drawn, add way more folds, that's what you're missing.
 
Level 2
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Jun 12, 2004
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Wormskull, your asking them to make god damn perfect piece of art, no ones gonna look that close in the game, :evil: SO SHUT THE FUCK UP :evil: , you're annoying.(who appointed him official critic?)
 
Level 1
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Aug 11, 2004
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Worm Skull... Your a fucking idiot. First of all, the curved X on his chest is his muscles, which you must not know alot about obviosly. Second, that shading on the side of his face is his temples, so save your dumbass coments because they're pointless and idiotic... This IS the best ninja skin I've seen, and it is very realistic. 5/5
 
Level 4
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Wormskull:WTF, WHY DID YOU SUBMITTED 3 NINJAS SKINS WHEN YOU CAN EDIT YOUR OLD ONE?
didnt you noticed that add/UPDATE resources button? making a new one and not editing the old one is veryyy lame!
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Worm, I believe that the update button was broken for some time. Im pretty sure.

Although I do think the curved X on the chest does mean that his clothes are too tight. Perhaps add some more loose clothing to his upper body and give it folds.

The eyes are nice, but now that I think about it, Wormskull is right, that brown line next to the eyes doesnt actually exist. That is, if you lowered it, it could be the cheek bone.

The weapon to me seems a little too...flimsy? :?

And do something with the demon hunter pants. It doesnt seem to fit. Reminds me to much of the demon hunter, maybe either tuck them in, or something. :x

Perhaps add a few accessories to him, like pouches or some shurikens to the belt. :p

And by the way, you guys need to stop looking at Wormskull's comments like negative insults. He is actually doing what hes suppose to do as a commenter...comment on the work as you feel...hes just telling people what to fix and do to make their work better, for now, and their future.
Chill out.

Oh and by the way, nice work Heuter...
 
Level 17
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i submitted all 3 ninja skins cause i dunno what of those is the best...changes at this one...new look of the face and improved battle dress
That is the freaking reason to why he uploaded them all...
Baah.. all of you made kinda useless posts to be honest.
(Yes, i know im quoting something that is 4,5 years old..)

Anyway, this skin is pretty damn awesome and i will try to find a use for it =)
 
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