Mysterious Place

[Lancer1111]

This is a cinematic terrain for my RPG (it's the Intro):

Somewhere in the Desert an Old Orc wanted to live in peace on an silent island...
But there were ancient magics, waiting for their revenge, that hold the place and they didn't want to get disturbed...
From the bloody corpse of the killed Orc, a dark thing raises... We ony can hope that it stays on this Island...

What do you think ? What should I improve (Remember: Cinematic) ?

 

[Darkmoon Hero]

Personally, I think it's too bright. Tone it down by adding fog, or something.

 

[Gilles]

The foreground is nice, but the background is awful. You need some background mountains, or nothing at all even. That one ugly lump with some fire is ruining the whole thing.

 

[chilla_killa]

Same opinion

 

[Lancer1111]

I tried to make mountains, BUT, when i've reached a height above the one in the picture, everything goes like this:

 

[Elfsilver Lord]

I tried to make mountains, BUT, when i've reached a height above the one in the picture, everything goes like this:

MiscData.txt should help with that.

 

[Lancer1111]

I already have it in the UI folder...

 

[L2love]

your using WEU i think because WEU only gets like that when i use normal editor it doesn't do that or your going 2 high is all.

 

[Lancer1111]

nope. I use normal WE only, i'll try to reinstall Wc3 tomorrow, because today I'm at the gamescom

 

[L2love]

whats your height level at? on the map?

 

[Lancer1111]

I've started with water everywhere, but i think it was 2.

 

[Gilles]

There's an absolute height in wc3 that cannot be surpassed. You made the map too small, you have to put the mountains way farther back in the distance.

 

[Ziggen]

Lower the light from above so there isn't a big white circle on the ground.

 

[Sakuria]

I like the area surrounding the throne, the doodad placement, tile variety and height variation all aids towards making the scene attractive. However has other people have said that volcano is unnatractive and i'm not a fan of how the archs 'clip' each other.
other than that i think it has great potential

 

[Lancer1111]

I'll rework the background and the lightning circle, but I have some other things to do in the next time...

 

[PsychoNerdial]

Pretty Good. Changing the sky wouldn't hurt though.