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This is a cinematic terrain for my RPG (it's the Intro):
Somewhere in the Desert an Old Orc wanted to live in peace on an silent island...
But there were ancient magics, waiting for their revenge, that hold the place and they didn't want to get disturbed...
From the bloody corpse of the killed Orc, a dark thing raises... We ony can hope that it stays on this Island...
What do you think ? What should I improve (Remember: Cinematic) ?
Somewhere in the Desert an Old Orc wanted to live in peace on an silent island...
But there were ancient magics, waiting for their revenge, that hold the place and they didn't want to get disturbed...
From the bloody corpse of the killed Orc, a dark thing raises... We ony can hope that it stays on this Island...
What do you think ? What should I improve (Remember: Cinematic) ?