Moon Glaive v0.1 [GUI]

[Moderator]

17:14, 22nd Dec 2009
TriggerHappy:

Review for Spell

You do know that all units custom values are defaulted at 0, right? Meaning that this is not MPI or MUI. You are also leaking a special effect and location. Furthermore, this effects allies. And please don't use a passive icon if the spell is not passive.

Status

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Rejected

 

[S.W.I.N.E]

Triggers

Triggers

• B
• Events
• Unit - A unit Starts the effect of an ability
• Conditions
• (Ability being cast) Equal to Moon Glaive
• Actions
• Set B_caster = (Casting unit)
• Set B_caster_point = ((Position of B_caster) offset by 185.00 towards ((Facing of B_caster) - 90.00) degrees)
• Unit - Create 1 dummy for (Owner of B_caster) at B_caster_point facing (Facing of B_caster) degrees
• Set B_dummy[(Custom value of (Triggering unit))] = (Last created unit)
• Unit - Add a 4.00 second Generic experation timer to Set B_dummy[(Custom value of (Triggering unit))]
• Unit - Make Set B_dummy[(Custom value of (Triggering unit))] Explode on death
• Trigger - Turn on B_MoveIt <gen>
• Trigger - Run B_MoveIt <gen> (checking conditions)
• Custom script: call RemoveLocation(udg_B_caster_point)

• B MoveIt
• Events
• Time - Every 0.03 seconds of game time
• Actions
• Unit - Move B_dummy[(Custom value of (Triggering unit))] instantly to ((Position of B_caster) offset by 256.00 towards (Facing of B_dummy[(Custom value of (Triggering unit))]) degrees), facing ((Facing of B_dummy[(Custom value of (Triggering unit))]) + 15.00)
• Unit Group - Pick every unit in (Units within 112.00 of (Position of B_dummy[(Custom value of (Triggering unit))]) matching ((((Triggering unit) is A structure) Not equal to True) or ((((Triggering unit) is alive) Not equal to False) or ((((Triggering unit) belongs to an allly of (Owner of B_dummy[(Custom value of (Triggering unit))]) Not equal to True) or ((((Triggering unit) is Magic immune) Not equal to True)
• Loop - Actions
• Set B_target = (Picked unit)
• Special Effect - Create a special effect a (Position of B_target) using Abilities\Weapons\HydraliskImpact\HydraliskImpact.mdl
• Unit - Cause B_caster to damage B_target, dealing (5.00 x (Real((Level of Moon Glaive for B_caster)))) damage of attack type Spells and damage type Normal
• Custom script: set udg_B_target = null

 

[Feniks7]

I think that u must check if a unit with dummy collides is dead. I hope u know how to do that)

 

[S.W.I.N.E]

I think that u must check if a unit with dummy collides is dead. I hope u know how to do that)

not like that idea died in the collision