[Cinematic] Mini Wars Trailer

[udg_Potato]

Sorry if I posted this in wrong thread,but There is no thread ''Video Clips''....
So Here is the link for my Trailer!

YouTube - Mini Wars Trailer

 

[Bob27]

The camera isn't very good. It just keeps on zooming in and out over and over again on the same place sometimes. Plus the title at the start are way to long, and could be made a lot shorter. I don't know whats up with the colours at the start, but its looks really weird. Then the biggest problem and most annoying thing in the whole trailer is when there is the fight with the water elemental, and when the camera just spins around. It dosn't look very good. Also in a lot of the places the camera will move or rotate to a place where nothing is happening at all, and there will just be some trees or something like that blocking the cameras view of what actually happening.

 

[udg_Potato]

Thanks anyway for comment..any more?

 

[CMarket]

Like Bob27 said, the camera is really annoying and the first minute and a half are just text that can go by in 10 seconds easily.

For a trailer it really doesn't tell us anything, I could have videoed any old warcraft 3 melee map and call it a trailer. The only thing that is shown in the trailer that isn't default warcraft 3 is a floating text system that shows what spell is cast and how much experience a hero gets, a system that I have seen many times in various maps.

 

[iSky]

agree with BoB27 and CMarket
Intro was too long and the camera move out of place at 2.00++ fix it =)

 

[Silk060]

I agree with both you, the camera isn't so good, you could do more artistic work in letters or something, special effects...

Anyway it is good ;P

 

[iSky]

Dont take it too hard on urself..practice makes perfect =)

 

[greasontim]

zoomin in n out should be taken out
1/3 of the trailer is the opening to it so u may want to cut that down

 

[bounty hunter2]

the opening is 2 long as greas said, but I liked the rapid fire thing

 

[iSky]

not only greas but Bob,CMarket,Silk and I