Majeln's House Terrain

[fladdermasken]

Hello hive. Decided to upload this terrain pic from me and my friend's still unfinished campaign. Torch me or praise me, I'm at your mercy
Any pointers are greatly appreciated since I'm new to this.
EDIT: Re-colored the waterfalls, fixed some of the bottom, removed rays

 

[N.Knight]

Great but wheres the terrain pic?!

 

[fladdermasken]

It doesn't show? Uploaded it with the "insert image" tool
EDIT: There we go, uploaded

 

[Celaquil]

Well, I say that except for those sun rays, the terrain looks very good from the middle and up. For the lower part of the terrain, however, I dont really understand what's going on. Seems like there are some watefalls that comes out from the rocks, this seems wrong, and the sun rays randomly appearing in that watefall doesnt look quite good either. The rocks doesnt bug me too much, but they dont really make sence either.

I'd say, fix up the lower part of the screenshot to make more sence, and remove the rays, and it would look much better.

 

[fladdermasken]

Removed the rays, fixed the lower part. The rocks are meant to symbolize cliffs as the "island" was torn off the ground (the site where it used to be is now an epic crater ). The waterfalls are quite random I guess, just thought it looked cool
Hope this looks any better

 

[Celaquil]

Bah, now you cant see the house >.>

 

[Dr. House]

did you base this on the terrain made by madsen?

 

[N.Knight]

@fladdermasken...You'll get the best constructive criticism here from the master terrainers! I suggest you follow their advice!
In my personal opinion the basic concept is good but still needs a bit more work!
Cheers for your first terrain at hive!

 

[fladdermasken]

did you base this on the terrain made by madsen?

I got the idea with the waterfalls from him yeah
@Keiji: I'll try to add some glow so you can see the house clearer. Thanks for your advice.
@Nknight001: Thanks pal

 

[Belgarath]

i'd get rid of the sun personally
then time the weather right so that the house isn't covered in the wind weather fx

also might want to consider lengthening the waterfalls to get rid of the water lapping around in the air

 

[fladdermasken]

i'd get rid of the sun personally
then time the weather right so that the house isn't covered in the wind weather fx

also might want to consider lengthening the waterfalls to get rid of the water lapping around in the air

Thanks for the advice, I'll try and upload another picture after I edit it

 

[PurgeandFire]

The green selection circle of death. =)

But nice job overall. It looks cool.

 

[Spoontoobig]

Over that fog it's hard to see all beautifulness!

 

[tml616]

reminds me of Aion login screen

the effects are so nice, I didn't believe it was WarIII

 

[fladdermasken]

Can't believe I missed the "green selection circle of death" *ashamed*
I'll try a little less dense fog to lighten up the image, thanks for the advice