LoaP Zombie Beta 1.6B

[Moderator]

11:55, 10th Jun 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[BreathingAcid]

Please make a proper description using BB Codes.

 

[j210_like]

Thanks for pointing out BB Codes to me. I admit I wasn't aware of them. On the next update(I have alot to do before next update), I will also update description. If it is mandatory to have them on here than please notify me and I'll correct asap. Have fun with the map, I'm open to all ideas, comments, and criticism .

 

[Gath_Stormer]

How does your map differ from the dozens of other "gay", idiotic, and rigged versions out there. (excluding a few and not implying your map is any of these things) LOAPs don't very good reputations and I wanted to know before playing your map if yours is a repeat of this misfortune.

 

[j210_like]

Well of course as the mapmaker, I personally as a beta prefer it over most LOAPS or Life or Whatevers in a loap terrained map. But, I’ll list main things I changed. I tried to keep the theme hell-based, as in demons, zombies, war, etc. There is a Storyline/main mission to map.
Setting: Loap Map, hell immerges from grounds and zombies attack. Red is leader of hell, (Balanced) He must kill you all and you must go into hell to stop zombie spawns. Zombie Spawns are computerized to prevent allying/cheating.

Different from most/other LoaPs:

Terrain Changed.
Added Missions/Secret heros for players to unlock by killing them, Balanced.
Deleted Repick
Made only one player can be one hero for whole game because no repick, only established for “Soldier” and “Wanderer” Hero.
Heros Have Missions based on their solo hero, such as evil/good paths and different roads to take. Bases unlocked, items unlocked, units, troops, etc. Storyline for them all different, do these to get strong enough to do main mission and stop hell. Once done an evil/good task it notifys Red for evil, or Army, Blue for Good.
Druggy has no changes yet, planning on deleting him, moving base, and changing him from druggy to something else.
All Custom models
Few spells so far, but all custom and GUI no vJASS
Custom Terraining
Few Systems in there like alling system being created, vote kick, kick spoofer, etc.
Custom theme based music.
Lots more I can’t put my hand on at the moment….


P.S v 1.4 is older without the missions and no repick for heros. Will Update it once I fix a few bugs in 1.6.…

 

[j210_like]

Oh sorry, also forgot to mention I'm planning on making the main mission 10x harder and adding a save/load system for the one hero you picked to play with.

 

[light bolt30]

Don't double post. You should keep changelogs in the main description under hidden tags.

 

[Cweener]

*sigh*

Well you see that EDIT button right there at the bottom right of your posts? Use it.
That's also a rule...

And for your information, It is a rule to have a proper description,
but it is also a rule to not have a map like this. check out the red highlighted rules(a.k.a. the ones your breaking) in my hidden tag and read them all to the fullest. (which you should have done before submitting)

RULES!!!!!

Compliance
No map may violate any Hive Workshop general or specific site rules.

Original Work
All maps must be significantly worked on, if not entirely created, by their submitter. Maps that were edited from someone else's work must include proof of permission to edit that work, and the original author may request that the map be taken down at any time.

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Completion
All maps must be close enough to completion to allow for a good experience by the player. This does not limit beta maps that are near completion, but does limit alpha and other under construction maps that are not significantly playable.

Gameplay
All maps must be fairly fun and decently balanced.

Presentation
All maps must be made in English, must not contain overwhelmingly bad spelling or grammar, must contain a valid author and map name, and must contain a well-written description to give the reader a good idea of what the map is about. Imports, terrain, camera, and other visuals should complement the game.

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Don't feel bad, I'm sure www.epicwar.com would love this map...

 

[j210_like]

um, i did use the update, i just didnt change description

 

[Cweener]

um, i did use the update, i just didnt change description

Who is that post aimed at?

 

[j210_like]

other guy, and btw u might wana base the game's grade by the actual gameplay first, not on the facts that im new to this site a bit and that its a LoaP. After all, it probably is a rule right? should I go take 30min of my life to link it? Judging a map's gameplay rating by a post/game type? Yeah....I'll change whatever an admin tells me too once they review my map, whether or not rejected.

 

[Tleno]

Sorry, this map is extremely low-quality and the description is bad too. Not good enough to be approved.
Next time, please work on your terraining, efficient trrigering and grammar skills!

 

[Cweener]

other guy, and btw u might wana base the game's grade by the actual gameplay first, not on the facts that im new to this site a bit and that its a LoaP. After all, it probably is a rule right? should I go take 30min of my life to link it? Judging a map's gameplay rating by a post/game type? Yeah....I'll change whatever an admin tells me too once they review my map, whether or not rejected.

My lengthy(ish) response

First of all, (I don't care what country you're from) please visit an English tutorial, and THW just so happens to have one.
It's right here, but I bet you don't bother to visit it, because you think you don't need it.

That took about 1 minute to link, all I had to do was highlight. (which is what took a minute) I have all that in a notepad on my desktop, because about 50% of all NEW maps are like yours.

Bad, and violating the rules.

The fact that you're new to this site means nothing, because when you upload your map you have to press a button saying I have read, understood and agree to abide by The Hive Workshop rules.
With the rules right above that button. The rules that I so kindly re-gave you.

The Only excuse remotely acceptable is if your blind, and well if you're blind and managed to even find a website, then congrats.

To add to my reasoning on why you being new doesn't matter, You've been given neg rep 3 times. 3! (The only reason you have don't have -4 rep is because you had neg rep and people felt sorry.) If you haven't checked out the rules by now, then you are as ignorant as I think you are.

The fact that it is a LOAP violates the rules. period. So a mod can ask you to change the whole map.

I've given this to a mod, and I can almost guarantee you that he won't download it. If he does, then I bet he doesn't play for my then ohhh...5 minutes. max.

I review all maps based on content that DESERVE my time. Go look at my reviews they are very well put together for very well put together maps.

Now, my rant on ignorance is over. feel free to flame me or cry or whatever it is people like you do. OH WAIT! after seeing you rep, don't go do that.
Because it probably involves reuploading your map.

I usually don't respond like that, but after looking at your rep and the reasons behind it, it seems you are just too ignorant to learn a damn thing from anybody previous, so I decided to be more blunt.

EDIT: oh yes, I put the above in a hidden tag, as a courtesy to others, since it was fairly lengthy, and I'm sure that nobody wants to scroll through it every time they come to respond.

 

[ap0calypse]

um, i did use the update, i just didnt change description

Multi-posting != Multi-uploading.
You did in fact double-post.

u might wana base the game's grade by the actual gameplay first, not on the facts that im new to this site a bit and that its a LoaP.

We're not judging you because your new, nor because this is a LoaP.
It's just not original (LoaPs are anything but original and zombies have grown old a year ago).
On top of that, I believe tleno is right: the quality is just too low to be acceptable.

Yeah....I'll change whatever an admin tells me too once they review my map, whether or not rejected.

Admins never review anything.
And I won't review your map either.

I'l just reject the map, since you obviously did not read the rules though you said you did.

 

[Cweener]

Multi-posting != Multi-uploading.

lol ap0, do you really think he understands jass syntax?

 

[ap0calypse]

lol ap0, do you really think he understands jass syntax?

But it's shorter to write that than saying what it actually means

 

[Cweener]

lol true

and don't get get