[KE] Revenge Of The Riders v1.3

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Moderator: StoPCampinGn00b version 1.3 [KE] Revenge of the Riders by Ar0n RATINGS [COLOR=white [COLOR=white Scores[/COLOR]] Gameplay: 19/30 Terrain & Scenery: 9/20 Total Score: 28/50 Explanation[/COLOR]]5 Stars: 47+ 4 Stars: 35-47 3 Stars: 25-34 2 Stars: 10-24 1 Stars: 1-9 CRITIQUE Gameplay: In short, the map's gameplay is similar to other dungeon crawl RPGs like monolith and Hive's famous Sunken City. The hero spells, especially the very custom ones were quite interesting and fun to use. The way to get abilities was nice idea. Great job on adding a PVP "EXP farming" area and making a basecamp that is actually useful to the player not just for items, but using the ability to teleport to basecamp or a monolith. Expect medium-fast paced gameplay to last for an hour, more or less depending on the amount of players. This map has a follow able story, I personally don't mind the small amount of humorous profanity in cinematics but I've thought I'd like to point that out before someone downloads the map, gets angry, and posts on the map . The English was easily understandable it did not affect the gameplay for people to misunderstand things . Also, I played LAN with 2 others and made it to the ice area but dropped due to a router problem; so far Spanish/Portuguese was removed! There wasn't any major problem with the gameplay excluding how the map wasn't very unique despite the features I've thought fondly of in the first paragraph. There is a bug though! The archmage like hero can cast a lightning strike type of spell with no cooldown or mana used if the spell is interrupted. i.e interrupted by moving, pressing stop, hold position, etc soon after the spell was targetted. 19/30 ​ Terrain & Aesthetics: The terrain was a little below average, it could use some better tile work, especially in the dirt area. There weren't any other aesthetics except for decorative doodads. I feel that there was a lack of doodads, adding more doodads near the sides of pathways would really make the map look less dry and empty. Add those that match the terrain one by one or a few at a time. The trees did look really cool and arcade like, and the dancing cactus were awesome! Anyway, the map just wasn't visually exquisite at all unless you count the spell animations. 9/20 ​ VERDICT The only way a map can be approved is if it follows the map submission rules that apply to the map type. - The map has been updated, all rules are now followed. I APPROVE the map! ​ NOTES Overall it's shorter dungeon crawl map that others should try if they like linear ORPGs. Feel free to contact me about this review on this map page OR message me about anything. (+2) reputation points for taking your time to upload this map to Hive.

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[andreariona]

Perhaps a screenshots would be nice?

 

[BandolXD]

Perhaps a screenshots would be nice?

^Agree.

That minimap image was shocked me . Gonna test it.

 

[GreeN!X]

Short review Hurrrrr

- Portuguese, Spanish or whatever voice acting with bad translations. I'd suggest removing the voice since you're submitting on an english forum. That would save up on filesize as well. Try improving the subtitles too.


- Timer doesn't run, fade filter isn't removed and I can only move the camera around.


- Once you open the game menu, you won't be able to return to the game nor save the game. Not sure if you can return to the game via pressing f10 again though.

- If these bugs appeared due to the fact that I'm playing single player. You should just have ended the game or gave a warning that it cannot be played in single player. Yes, I know you wrote "multiplayer adventure" in your description but that doesn't mean that a map should bug up when played in single player.

With that said, I vote for rejection with a rating of 2/5.

 

[ArOn]

Short review Hurrrrr

- Portuguese, Spanish or whatever voice acting with bad translations. I'd suggest removing the voice since you're submitting on an english forum. That would save up on filesize as well. Try improving the subtitles too.

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- Timer doesn't run, fade filter isn't removed and I can only move the camera around.

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- Once you open the game menu, you won't be able to return to the game nor save the game. Not sure if you can return to the game via pressing f10 again though.

- If these bugs appeared due to the fact that I'm playing single player. You should just have ended the game or gave a warning that it cannot be played in single player. Yes, I know you wrote "multiplayer adventure" in your description but that doesn't mean that a map should bug up when played in single player.

With that said, I vote for rejection with a rating of 2/5.

It is not an error/bug
you can't play this map in single player c:
min. 2 players...

 

[BandolXD]

OMG, I will not able to test this ... I should end being a loner XD.

 

[Legal_Ease]

 

[StoPCampinGn00b]

Hi Ar0n, I've played your map with some friends and we all think it has enough quality. Before I spend my time typing up a moderator review, I need you to add screenshots; it's a rule for this to be approved.

Here, a tutorial: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...w-add-screenshot-your-map-description-241054/

 

[ArOn]

Hi Ar0n, I've played your map with some friends and we all think it has enough quality. Before I spend my time typing up a moderator review, I need you to add screenshots; it's a rule for this to be approved.

Here, a tutorial: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/...w-add-screenshot-your-map-description-241054/

done!
I added the picture of the minimap :3

 

[StoPCampinGn00b]

Map approved using this review below!

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Moderator: StoPCampinGn00b version 1.3 [KE] Revenge of the Riders by Ar0n RATINGS Scores Explanation Gameplay: 19/30 Terrain & Scenery: 9/20 Total Score: 28/50 5 Stars: 47+ 4 Stars: 35-47 3 Stars: 25-34 2 Stars: 10-24 1 Stars: 1-9 CRITIQUE Gameplay: In short, the map's gameplay is similar to other dungeon crawl RPGs like monolith and Hive's famous Sunken City. The hero spells, especially the very custom ones were quite interesting and fun to use. The way to get abilities was nice idea. Great job on adding a PVP "EXP farming" area and making a basecamp that is actually useful to the player not just for items, but using the ability to teleport to basecamp or a monolith. Expect medium-fast paced gameplay to last for an hour, more or less depending on the amount of players. This map has a follow able story, I personally don't mind the small amount of humorous profanity in cinematics but I've thought I'd like to point that out before someone downloads the map, gets angry, and posts on the map . The English was easily understandable it did not affect the gameplay for people to misunderstand things . Also, I played LAN with 2 others and made it to the ice area but dropped due to a router problem; so far Spanish/Portuguese was removed! There wasn't any major problem with the gameplay excluding how the map wasn't very unique despite the features I've thought fondly of in the first paragraph. There is a bug though! The archmage like hero can cast a lightning strike type of spell with no cooldown or mana used if the spell is interrupted. i.e interrupted by moving, pressing stop, hold position, etc soon after the spell was targetted. 19/30 ​ Terrain & Aesthetics: The terrain was a little below average, it could use some better tile work, especially in the dirt area. There weren't any other aesthetics except for decorative doodads. I feel that there was a lack of doodads, adding more doodads near the sides of pathways would really make the map look less dry and empty. Add those that match the terrain one by one or a few at a time. The trees did look really cool and arcade like, and the dancing cactus were awesome! Anyway, the map just wasn't visually exquisite at all unless you count the spell animations. 9/20 ​ VERDICT The only way a map can be approved is if it follows the map submission rules that apply to the map type. - The map has been updated, all rules are now followed. I APPROVE the map! ​ NOTES Overall it's shorter dungeon crawl map that others should try if they like linear ORPGs. Feel free to contact me about this review on this map page OR message me about anything. (+2) reputation points for taking your time to upload this map to Hive.

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