Ok I will be straight with you...
This so called "map" of yours is the meaning of complete failure.
This thing that you did there is something I can do in less than 5 minutes. I really dont care if it is your first map. DONT upload it if it is your first map. Even if it is your first map this thing is a complete piece of shit.
And what makes it even more irritating is the fact that you got decent comments for this map you have created in I suppose 10 minutes or so when other maps that people have been working on for months and even years are ignored.
Once more Hiveworkshop has proved that is simply sucks.
Gf