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JFA
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Key Concept | AoS - Favorite type of map. You managed to create some interesting features in this AoS, as the Gold Mines system for example. Starting with your loading screen, it seems a bit confusing and not done well. The main image is cropped and doubled but the text from it cannot be read. Main language was Turkish but you managed to translate it into English but it seems that you forgot some texts and also the names of some units, like the Avatar of Vengeance that is wandering around the main base from the top. Strong amount of heroes with fine abilities. Items as well. The description of the items is currently fine but the way you arranged the shops is a bit confusing, try separating them and naming them as "main" "early" "late" so on. Some passive abilities have active icons. The Storm Pandaren's third skill for example. Found some typos. "25% chance to upgrades your ring", should be "25% chance to upgrade your ring". |
Gameplay | There is no announcer of when the battle starts excepting a Grunt saying "Ready for Battle", or that might be the Orc Warchief from the campaign. Last hitting seems to be ok. The creeps though might have a high amount of movement speed. Abilities are not set on QWER system. That might be a problem for newbies. Trying to find all the keys to combo their spells. Izual Report II from one of the bosses, "Baratrum" which should be "Barathrum", does not specify what to do with the gained item since it does not give any bonuses or something like that or describes anything that might be used in combination. I like the permanent ability system that you can get after picking a hero, however, it would be cool if you could upgrade it every 5 levels for example. The Zergling is regarded as a demon? Kerrigan might be mad hearing this.  The peon unit like courier should be moved into the consumables shop since it is not regarded as an advanced item. |
Terrain & Aesthetics | The terrain could use some work. Much more if you ask me. Too many cliffs where they should not be, doodads placed a bit wrong. Also, the structures of each faction could be modified to fit them. For the devils, think about using the Burning Legion structures since a Human Barrack and an Ancient of War from the Night Elves does not really fit that faction. Check out the hiveworkshop's models section, you'll find a lot of cool things done by those talented guys out there. |
Wizardry | The spells seem ok for some heroes but for others, like the Zergling for example, do not synergize well. The spells of a hero should combo while used in combination because if they don't the hero can be disadvantaged compared to other heroes.  Some passives have active buttons and the tooltips for some of them have typos. |
Final Suggestions | Improve the loading screen. Try working a bit more on the terrain. Create spells that will synergize for heroes that don't have such thing. Add hints or text messages for some features that appear out of nowhere. |
Key ConceptAoS - Favorite type of map. You managed to create some interesting features in this AoS, as the Gold Mines system for example. Starting with your loading screen, it seems a bit confusing and not done well. The main image is cropped and doubled but the text from it cannot be read. Main language was Turkish but you managed to translate it into English but it seems that you forgot some texts and also the names of some units, like the Avatar of Vengeance that is wandering around the main base from the top. Strong amount of heroes with fine abilities. Items as well. The description of the items is currently fine but the way you arranged the shops is a bit confusing, try separating them and naming them as "main" "early" "late" so on. Some passive abilities have active icons. The Storm Pandaren's third skill for example. Found some typos. "25% chance to upgrades your ring", should be "25% chance to upgrade your ring".
GameplayThere is no announcer of when the battle starts excepting a Grunt saying "Ready for Battle", or that might be the Orc Warchief from the campaign. Last hitting seems to be ok. The creeps though might have a high amount of movement speed. Abilities are not set on QWER system. That might be a problem for newbies. Trying to find all the keys to combo their spells. Izual Report II from one of the bosses, "Baratrum" which should be "Barathrum", does not specify what to do with the gained item since it does not give any bonuses or something like that or describes anything that might be used in combination.
Terrain & AestheticsThe terrain could use some work. Much more if you ask me. Too many cliffs where they should not be, doodads placed a bit wrong. Also, the structures of each faction could be modified to fit them. For the devils, think about using the Burning Legion structures since a Human Barrack and an Ancient of War from the Night Elves does not really fit that faction. Check out the hiveworkshop's models section, you'll find a lot of cool things done by those talented guys out there. [ce
Wizardry[/center]The spells seem ok for some heroes but for others, like the Zergling for example, do not synergize well. The spells of a hero should combo while used in combination because if they don't the hero can be disadvantaged compared to other heroes.
Final SuggestionsImprove the loading screen. Try working a bit more on the terrain. Create spells that will synergize for heroes that don't have such thing. Add hints or text messages for some features that appear out of nowhere.
As for now, I will give you a 3.8 rating, that being a 4 stars rating. Try to improve what I mentioned. The map is nice.
