First off this doesn't belong on the hive..Looks like its incompleted. Terrain needs alot of improving and description is very lacking.. Do not post maps that aren't incomplete or no effort been put into it. Read tutorials on cinematics on the hive forums, it'll help you alot.
After reading a few tutorials on the hive you might learn something new and improve the map to greater heights.. I would like to see all the fixes in your next version. I didn't download this yet and will see what others got to say.
Current Status: REJECTED
It took me 6 hours to make this and you're saying little work...
Yeah the terrain may be little, but I was focusing on trying camera movements.
If you actually saw it, you'd see what I was trying to do. And I've read a bunch on cinematics, about terrain and stuff, but the map I was trying to do didn't require much terrain. Just an alleyway with houses, some crates, and soem riflemen to do the job.
And btw ... the map is not incomplete ... just needs some fixing, like I've already said in my previous comment. =)
Thanks for your criticism though, all though you've basically told me in one large paragraph to fix my terrain, and to read tutorials, one, which I've already done.
Edit: And the cinematic takes place in one small place on the map, and if I added too much doodads, etc, like I USUALLY do, it'd interfere with all my stuff. I'm trying to add things right now to improve it, but to make it look really nice, I'd probably make a cinematic that uses more terrain.