Inner Core.

[Azurot]

One of many caverns leading in, or out, of a massive volcano. Critic it as much as possible, I don't personally like it, but I'm not entirely sure what to do to it.

Meh?

 

[L2love]

The lava just doesn't look that good it seems like your using fire instead of glow doodads.

 

[Kino]

Well Volcano rocks are usually VERY dark in colour almost a metallic black from what Ive seen perhaps a darkening the rocks could help.

Secondly lava usually has darker patches of red "stuff" in it. How you want to do that is up to you. But using the "Doom" target sfx with its Z set to almost nothing can work sometimes.

 

[M0rbid]

Am I allowed to draw into your piece a bit?
I would like to underline some things

 

[Oziris]

I agree with Kino, also add some stalagmites.
Delete the glows that are making does rocks so bright and bland.
Add orange light around/above the lava only.
Make those rocks darker, the ones that are near the lava should be brighter but a little reddish/orange.

 

[Raven0]

also add some stalagmites.

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Also you have way too much glow on the lava which makes it look like a fire stream instead of a lava stream. Also the fog is much too dense and makes it difficult to see the picture in general. I would either reduce the fog or add in custom lighting on specific areas.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

personaly i love the lava. in fact the lava should be left untouched. some more detail to the terrain would be nice, such* as umm....well im not sure

 

[fladdermasken]

I must agree with thedeathunterxx, the lava is really creative and well done.

 

[The_Olorin]

Its well done work and i dont know what else you should do with that kind of picture. When i look at this picture its like" Its good work, but theres something missing in the picture". and i dont know what it is. Overall nice job for that kind of picture.