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I have come to cleanse these lands!

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Played around a bit with the UTM, but most of the things in here are default stuff ^^

Anyways, Comments and blaha would be great.

Uploaded 2 versions, original and Photoshoped;D
 

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That.. Paladin... is screwed.... xD
Rly... that guy is dead! xD

I don't like the first one, the photoshoped one is better.
To improve the picture I suggest:

- Make the fog more darker and closer to the camera point.

- Less massing of zombies, and make them face the paladin might be a good idea.

- I like the rocky area in the back, but what's up with the two trees that pop up out of there. It does add a good feeling but it does not make any sence. xD

- The ship and the tree are kinda doing a fusion right there... xD It does not look that good, either replace the tree so it does not look like it's comming out of the ship or remove the tree.

It can use some work but it's decent. :p And I realy feel sorry for that paladin... xD
It's funny, I like that. :p
Besides those things I mentioned you did a good job! =:D
 
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I really like this, the units actually make the terrain for once. The tree in the boat does look awful, but I disagree with Void, I like the rocks.
 
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Well alright, i'll try to play around with the fog more.
Actually, the three is ment to add some feeling to the fact that that boat has been there for a long time, tho i guess i failed ^^

And well, if there was like 3 zombies, why the fokk would they send a MASTER UBRER GODLEAIK PALADINZ0R to cleanse the lands? man a farmer can do three zombies D:

But yeah, i'll try to fix the things you've mentioned.

Reason for the cliffs?
I hate straight cliffs, really they look so.. premade. So i just massed rock chunks with the pathing of a barrel ^^

But yeah, thanks everyone :)
 
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But it's much cooler with rocks!
I mean, last time i looked outside the mountains were liek rocky. but uhm that was about a year ago so perhaps it changed.
lol

Well mountains don't usually look like a bunch of rocks. More like folds and the height varies. The raise tool definitely gives the most realistic mountains.
 
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Tint everything darker, the grass, maybe add a black/gray fog take out a few zombies
/ maybe add a cool glow to the paladin. (make him shine out in the dark is what im getting at) idk its ur terrian/map
Take out the tree merging with the ship. / like the ship
Maybe even tint the water dark blue or black even.
Maybe add a region fog of white/blue
-just some ideas
 
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I'd bet anything that the Paladin is going to hax his way out of it. Newb Paladins.

Anyway. I like the terrain. I've seen some (but not many >.>) rock "mountains" like that, especially near water. I mean, maybe you went a little overboard on it, but meh, it wasn't very noticeable to me until everyone pointed it out. I was too busy looking at the Paladin and his giant fail landing spot, tbh.
 
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