Holy Peasant.blp

[Moderator]

16:18, 17th Nov 2008
Hawkwing: Not enough hair contrast, poorly done chainmail, which was simply placed over the team colour giving it a messy result. Make some changes and it may be approved.

Edit: Failed to make changes.

 

[kingbdogz]

Note that this is my very first Skin ATTEMPTED, not posted. So ive never done another skin in my life

 

[Misha]

OMG his face looks so retarded xD Lmao xD

Anyway, it is a bit blurry, a bit more shadows eh? Sharpen?

~Misha~

 

[kingbdogz]

Yeah the wrap + the blond hair makes it extremely hard for the face to still stand out. Well thanks for replying.

 

[Misha]

Wow that was frikin' fast =D

 

[kingbdogz]

Lol well i just uploaded this so ive been sticking around for a while, anyway im trying to fix the blurriness now but its not very easy since it's metal.

 

[Misha]

Blur has always been a problem with skinz =3

 

[kingbdogz]

Update: Fixed the blurriness to an extent, looks alot better now.

 

[cHeRoL]

You can change the bag too .

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Fix teh border between TC and teh armor.

 

[Devine]

you're view of a "holy" man is a blonde man?
Antisemithic bastard! D: lol.
Neonazi!

 

[oh_snap]

you're view of a "holy" man is a blonde man?
Antisemithic bastard! D: lol.
Neonazi!

lol.... I believe he is a holy, because of the almost non existent (aka blends in) cross on his chest.

Anyways, the armor seems a bit strange, looks like someone shot plate mail armor with an assault rifle. And the TC seems a bit oddly placed, and disruptive. I will give you credit, that you actually did freehand however.

~Snap

 

[Ghost765]

the armor doesnt look alot like platemail, but hey, no ones gonna zoom in during the middle of a game to see if there are holes in his armor or not. it probably looks fine in the regular camera view.

 

[kingbdogz]

you're view of a "holy" man is a blonde man?
Antisemithic bastard! D: lol.
Neonazi!

Lol, i couldn't think of another name, and it has a Crusaders cross which is holy. The blond hair was just because i had to change the hair. Plus, i like blond hair on this dude it makes him look funny . Btw sorry for my noobiness but whats TC?

the armor doesnt look alot like platemail, but hey, no ones gonna zoom in during the middle of a game to see if there are holes in his armor or not. it probably looks fine in the regular camera view.

exactly, it looks a bit strange with the holes on the actual skin, but ingame it just gives it a cool effect.

EDIT: Wait is TC the cross? then yes i will fix it. I thought it looked messy anyway.

EDIT2: I fixed the cross a bit, read the top for more information.

 

[Zerox]

TC means Team Color. The part that changes color based on who's team they are on.

 

[kingbdogz]

TC means Team Color. The part that changes color based on who's team they are on.

oh my bad, i made the cross look better anyway.

BTW moderator, how could i improve this in order to get it approved.

 

[whitecrusader13]

well thats realy good for your first skin but you should maybe improve the chainmail a bit, but in general its good for a first skin!

 

[kingbdogz]

wait im confused, hawkwing said that my chain main goes over the teamcolor, but i don't see it going over teamcolor anywhere, the top armour is my own armour i created, not chainmail. I got inspired by the bubble wrap

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Thats what i said. The TC (Team color(In this case red)) is not bordered. You must get the armor to 'end' somewhere.

 

[kingbdogz]

ahh ok ill fix it.

 

[Misha]

Kinda looks even funnier now xD But the real deal is to fix that team color on his armor. cya

 

[kingbdogz]

Hey guys, im a noob at skinning so, how would i fix this team colour issue, or more importantly how could i add new team colour. The way the team colour is set out right now does not fit the top armour unless i made it chain mail, and even then it would look quite strange.

Any tips?

 

[Anachron]

Looks cool, but give him some Double D boobs.

Edit: Nevermind I fought what I have seeked. lol

 

[Misha]

team color can be aded to the covered places by simply erasing the spot, but if you erase where is no teamcolor on the model, then you get a hole. So be smart =)

 

[Anachron]

team color can be aded to the covered places by simply erasing the spot, but if you erase where is no teamcolor on the model, then you get a hole. So be smart =)

I think if you give him an wand it would be cool

 

[Misha]

I think if you give him an wand it would be cool

That's kinda LOL =3

 

[Anachron]

That's kinda LOL =3

It would be more funny with an hydra head on his bag and a wand which looks like frost, then put a wife on his head sitting and give her an little goblin and in her hands she got ice cream and on the other a bazooka.

 

[Misha]

It would be more funny with an hydra head on his bag and a wand which looks like frost, then put a wife on his head sitting and give her an little goblin and in her hands she got ice cream and on the other a bazooka.

Whoa xD this is a frikin' skin xD not model xD

 

[Anachron]

Whoa xD this is a frikin' skin xD not model xD

Damn Its a skin... I pwned myself =(

 

[Vasxazard]

It would be better if the cross on his chest was team colored. That's just my opinion.

 

[Anachron]

It would be better if the cross on his chest was team colored. That's just my opinion.

Nice idea.

 

[TurtleRacingCar]

well its a good idea but my opinion is...
- please chance the cross like vasxazard said, at the moment it doesnt look like a cross, more like blood(if you look at the screenshot without zoom)
- chance the standart stuff like the lumber and the bag
- the golden hair idea is good but i rly dont like the beard(well its just MY opinion)
- its a holy peasant but imo hes way to friendly, he could be more evil

well thats my mind to this skin maybe something could help you. but iam sure this can be a good skin! keep working

 

[Misha]

Hmmz....... i just don't see enough changes here buddy oO