High/Blood Elf Female Lieutenant

[StonemaulMidget]

With all due respect, you merely placed a woman's head in between a man's shoulders.
Adjust the rest of the body, so it's feminine.

 

[fang24]

so uh. It looks good but like. that's not a female. That's a girly man. Good start I will give you and trust me I would love to have more female elves to cover more units but that's just a man body with the woman's head.

also just noticed you can see the seem where the head was put on.

 

[Fugrim]

Now I do not want be be a critic ,but as a man I need to ask...Where are the chest bombs?
Edit:

• Ok in all serious I think you guys are too harsh. First of all, the way you made the head and the use of helmet is perfect just need to fix the NECK

• Second hands.Perfect choise to use Anasterian gloves BUT you need to use more of it to cover that it is seen.

• 3th the boots MUST be changed. That is the first thing that make her be more of a man then women. RESPECT a woman dignaty and give a some proper boots.

If you have work on other models I can take a look into it and update the model with these changes and send you the update model.
I really LOVE this idea I also am a fan of your Republic Lieutenant and I want this to be as good as that one.

 

[fang24]

Now I do not want be be a critic ,but as a man I need to ask...Where are the chest bombs?
Edit:

• Ok in all serious I think you guys are too harsh. First of all, the way you made the head and the use of helmet is perfect just need to fix the NECK

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• Second hands.Perfect choise to use Anasterian gloves BUT you need to use more of it to cover that it is seen.

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• 3th the boots MUST be changed. That is the first thing that make her be more of a man then women. RESPECT a woman dignaty and give a some proper boots.

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If you have work on other models I can take a look into it and update the model with these changes and send you the update model.
I really LOVE this idea I also am a fan of your Republic Lieutenant and I want this to be as good as that one.

I don't intend to be harsh. I am just not good at saying the right words. Personally I would be happy if minimum someone took the night elf archer and slapped a sword and shield on her.

 

[Fugrim]

I don't intend to be harsh. I am just not good at saying the right words. Personally I would be happy if minimum someone took the night elf archer and slapped a sword and shield on her.

Not that either, but you want to give good feedback this way the author can see what he missed while making it (i miss things all the time when making models that's why I double/triple check them before and still can find something else later).
I consider it is best to show by example where the changes should be made and why they should be made so the author can review them and make the proper changes
Edit: I hope my ideas helped you @Superfrycook

 

[Deolrin]

The proportions were changed and she looks feminine enough. I don't understand what people are complaining about. I think you did a great job here, @Superfrycook.

 

[Fugrim]

The proportions were changed and she looks feminine enough. I don't understand what people are complaining about. I think you did a great job here, @Superfrycook.

I did not say much about the proportions. I focused on the parts of the body which were not covered

 

[fang24]

Not that either, but you want to give good feedback this way the author can see what he missed while making it (i miss things all the time when making models that's why I double/triple check them before and still can find something else later).
I consider it is best to show by example where the changes should be made and why they should be made so the author can review them and make the proper changes
Edit: I hope my ideas helped you @Superfrycook

Well i did point out the neck seme but i don't really know what I could honestly add. Maybe less chest armor so you can see female better. it's suposed to be a lutenet so a halfway between the male one and female archer would be good. Like add some gauntlets add the plate boots keep the chest piece add the helm add a cape. is that better?

 

[Fugrim]

Well i did point out the neck seme but i don't really know what I could honestly add. Maybe less chest armor so you can see female better. it's suposed to be a lutenet so a halfway between the male one and female archer would be good. Like add some gauntlets add the plate boots keep the chest piece add the helm add a cape. is that better?

replace it with maiev/warden armor

 

[Deolrin]

I'm really glad that she doesn't have boobplate. Fuck boobplates.

 

[fang24]

replace it with maiev/warden armor

You know that sounds pretty good. I would how ever say the warden not maiev armor. maiev's armor would be too uh. best way I can say is too "erm a ninja ninin. shadow death stabby emo." where the warden looks like they take their job seriously. But maybe that's just me.

 

[Superfrycook]

I'm really glad that she doesn't have boobplate. Fuck boobplates.

Guess, you’re right. Gotta update this one.

 

[StonemaulMidget]

You did a great job with the upper torso, but the pelvic region demands a little attention.
A woman's hip is generally wider than that of a man, and your model here still has a man's hip.
- See here for details.

Otherwise, you're doing great!

 

[Ardenaso]

this is much better now, you should also reduce the height of her collar thing

 

[9Nes]

@Superfrycook Hi! The model is great, but the issue I'm having is that the Blood Elf model porduces random sounds (like death screams of units). Any ideas how to fix this? My guess is there's an issue with the file itself. This does not change regardless of sound set selected for model.

 

[MorderiTor]

Hi

Nice model, but I need to submit a bug report, when I place this unit on battlefield then it randomly start to play death sounds, doesn't matter if I change or disable sound of the unit it plays regardless. So I would appreciated if you could fix it or tell me how to fix it