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Discussion in 'Screenwriting, Storyboarding & Concept Creation' started by Banti, Aug 6, 2014.

  1. Banti

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  2. Veritas 117

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    Your link doesn't lead anywhere mate
     
  3. Banti

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    Sorry That's new link to pastebin. Someone is helping me with dialogs but I think I need help with quests descriptions and requirements http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/pastebin.php?id=2835ot

    Main Quest
    Demon Lord has awaken. Only you can defeat him
    - Ask about Demon Lord in Riften |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Help the Farmers with the Witch and talk with Edgar |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Take Edgar Report to Elonai in Silvermoon |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Defeat Orc Warchief and Use Pendants to Open Demonic Gate
    - Defeat Demon Lord

    Find Eomer Quest
    Amanda asked me to find her friend Eomer in the village to the West from Riften and tell him that she need to see him. In exchange, she will let me use her alchemy workbench
    - Search for Eomer in the village to the West from Riften |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Slay all Goblins and Cave Trolls which attacked the village and talk with Eomer |cFF7777CD(Completed)|r
    - Bring the Eomer's Letter to Amanda

    Moon Flowers Quest
    If I find Moon Flowers, Elian can make moon potion
    - Find Moon Flowers
    - Bring Moon Flowers to Elian

    Troll Prisoner Quest
    Henry offered me reward for rescue Samantha.
    - Rescue Samantha |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Return to Henry

    Dark Ritual Quest
    Priest of Lathander gave us a mission to destroy Lorkin and his Acolites.
    - Defeat Lorkin Acolites on first ritual site and return to Neurik|cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Find Lorkin on the south east from Silvermoon and defeat him

    Elder Tree Quest
    Elder Druid asked us to search for Thunder Lizard Egg, Clarity Potion, Healing Salve and Stone of Live. With this ingredients, he can restore Elder Tree
    - Find the Ingredients
    - Bring the Ingredients to Elder Druid

    Wand of the Wind Quest
    If I find Wand of the Wind in your journey I can get Battle Robe from Kathrin.
    - Find Wand of the Wind |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Bring Wand of he Wind to Kathrin

    Lost Treasure Quest
    Merchant Tim asked us to get him Sapphire of the Sunken City. Murloc Warchief is guarding him somewhere in the ruins to the south west.
    - Find Sapphire of the Sunken City
    - Bring Sapphire of the Sunken City to Merchant Tim

    Spider Queen Quesat
    On the north east from Village lives many spiders. It's a nest of Spider Queen. Many villagers were lost in that place. For killing Spider Queen, I can get reward from Lucy
    - Kill Spider Queen |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Return to Lucy

    Bandit Lord Quest
    Is many attacks from from bandts. If I kill Bandit Lord, I can get reward from Santor
    - Kill Bandit Lord
    - Return to Santor

    Archery Competition Quest
    Eradir told me that I can attend Archery Competition. Person who score the most points for shooting the archery target can win a reward
    - Attack the Archery Target to Score Points and to Win Archery Competition

    Ogre Lord Quest
    If I defeat Ogre Lord, I can get reward from Forest Ranger
    - Kill Bandit Lord |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Return to Forest Ranger
     
  4. Mythic

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    You can try MS Word, it helps with grammar and words.
     
  5. Veritas 117

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    Main Quest
    The Demon Lord has awaken. Only you can defeat him
    - Ask about The Demon Lord in Riften |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Help the Farmers with the Witch and talk with Edgar |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Take Edgar's Report to Elonai in Silvermoon |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Defeat the Orc Warchief and Use the Pendants to Open the Demonic Gate
    - Defeat the Demon Lord

    Find Eomer Quest
    Amanda asked me to find her friend Eomer in the village to the West of Riften and tell him that she needs to see him. In exchange, she will let me use her alchemy workbench
    - Search for Eomer in the village to the West of Riften |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Slay all the Goblins and Cave Trolls that attacked the village and talk with Eomer |cFF7777CD(Completed)|r
    - Bring Eomer's Letter to Amanda

    Moon Flowers Quest
    If I find Moon Flowers, Elian can make a moon potion
    - Find Moon Flowers
    - Bring the Moon Flowers to Elian

    Troll Prisoner Quest
    Henry offered me a reward for the rescue of Samantha.
    - Rescue Samantha |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Return to Henry

    Dark Ritual Quest
    The Priest of Lathander gave us a mission to destroy Lorkin and his Acolites.
    - Defeat Lorkin's Acolites at the first ritual site and return to Neurik|cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Find Lorkin to the south east of Silvermoon and defeat him

    Elder Tree Quest
    The Elder Druid asked us to search for a Thunder Lizard Egg, a Clarity Potion, a Healing Salve, and a Stone of Life. With these ingredients, he can restore The Elder Tree
    - Find the Ingredients
    - Bring the Ingredients to The Elder Druid

    Wand of the Wind Quest
    If I find The Wand of the Wind in my journey I can get a Battle Robe from Kathrin.
    - Find the Wand of the Wind |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Bring the Wand of he Wind to Kathrin

    Lost Treasure Quest
    Merchant Tim asked us to get him the Sapphire of the Sunken City. The Murloc Warchief is guarding it somewhere in the ruins to the south west.
    - Find the Sapphire of the Sunken City
    - Bring the Sapphire of the Sunken City to Merchant Tim

    Spider Queen Quest
    Many spiders live to the northeast of the village. It's a nest of The Spider Queen. Many villagers have been lost in that place. For killing the Spider Queen, I can get a reward from Lucy
    - Kill The Spider Queen |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Return to Lucy

    Bandit Lord Quest
    There have been many attacks from bandits. If I kill The Bandit Lord, I can get a reward from Santor
    - Kill The Bandit Lord
    - Return to Santor

    Archery Competition Quest
    Eradir told me that I can attend the Archery Competition. The person who scores the most points for shooting the archery target will win a reward
    - Attack the archery target to score points and to win the Archery Competition

    Ogre Lord Quest
    If I defeat The Ogre Lord, I can get a reward from The Forest Ranger
    - Kill The Ogre Lord |cff7777aa(Completed)|r
    - Return to The Forest Ranger


    Here are some edits. There are still some confusing capitalization, but I don't think it is too much to worry about.
     
  6. Remixer

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    @Veritas

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