Hayate Random Art

[Hantoo]

Lovely concept. Don't forget that raptors and most predatory dinosaurs walked on their toes. Meaning that they had a digitigrade walk. Yours looks anatomically incorrect.

Here's a quick example made by me:

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Ohhh Silly me, no wonder I couldn't get it right no matter why

Thank you very much

Anyway Here's more, Gotta fix the leg soon

 

[Mr.Goblin]

These new artpieces are great! :O so glad you're jumping into concept-arts!!!

 

[Hantoo]

Changes in Armour and Leg Fix (Hopefully)

 

[TheKurt009]

whoah...

 

[Hantoo]

Going to continue the modelling soon

 

[Kyrbi0]

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Going to continue the modelling soon

Oh man Oh man Oh man Oh man
: D

 

[stein123]

whoa!!!! can't wait to see this finished ♥

 

[WhiteFang]

Love these man,keep it up

 

[8512590215848]

please, give more attentions on line\coloring clearness, i mean when you draw an detalised part - spend few minutes let your line made by two touches in the point of collision don't look interrupted. Giving such a smooth looking to your art will greatly increase it's overall quality.
Also, about coloring and shaping, seems like you touch your stuff warily, like you afraid to ruin the whole art, but the irony is that these pale timid colors ruin it much more, make it look sketchy. Give moar attention to fill your outline carcass with pure colors.
With best regards Once every amateurs artist becomes a pearl, so, keep your artworking.

 

[Hantoo]

please, give more attentions on line\coloring clearness, i mean when you draw an detalised part - spend few minutes let your line made by two touches in the point of collision don't look interrupted. Giving such a smooth looking to your art will greatly increase it's overall quality.
Also, about coloring and shaping, seems like you touch your stuff warily, like you afraid to ruin the whole art, but the irony is that these pale timid colors ruin it much more, make it look sketchy. Give moar attention to fill your outline carcass with pure colors.
With best regards Once every amateurs artist becomes a pearl, so, keep your artworking.

thank you for the feedback, I will note down those things

 

[Hantoo]

Relieving some stress from my college Shit
WIP

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Wonder if I should do BG, Im quite horrible at those

 

[8512590215848]

before starting coloring and shaping give your character an carcass, a scheme of his bones. That is a good method for choosing the best angle and pose.

 

[Kyrbi0]

Somewhat soulful eyes.

 

[Hantoo]

before starting coloring and shaping give your character an carcass, a scheme of his bones. That is a good method for choosing the best angle and pose.

Carcass? Scheme of bone? Can you explain abit? Or you mean like gesture or line of action or some sort

 

[8512590215848]

Kinda of this

 

[Hantoo]

Kinda of this

So is like the structure line?

 

[8512590215848]

yep

 

[Hantoo]

Time to revive this, I probably going to draw everyday from now on

Here's a new piece, this is actually an update from a older sketch :V
Dont ask me who it is, Is just a generic Orc

 

[Kyrbi0]

Cool. I like it, though it's really 'bloom'-y, I think?

Also, I hope drawing isn't the only thing you'll be doing every day. ; )

 

[Naze]

I like it but yeah, it also needs to be more defined as Kyrbi0 said. And hey, how about your avatar? Did you draw and animate it?

 

[Hantoo]

I like it but yeah, it also needs to be more defined as Kyrbi0 said. And hey, how about your avatar? Did you draw and animate it?

More Define in what way?

Yes I draw and Animate my avatar

@Kyrbi0
I still remember your raptor dont worry

My Avatar in Full Glory

https://www.facebook.com/video.php?v=156711021748130

Edit: Here's the Orc Animated for fun

 

[Hantoo]

I can finally make the character I designed long ago look abit livelier

 

[Mr.Goblin]

Glad to see you posting stuff once again! I've seen you've started using Spline? neat stuff! I'd love to see more sharp volumes though, your use of brush makes the outline of your chracters quite blurry from upclose.

 

[Hantoo]

Glad to see you posting stuff once again! I've seen you've started using Spline? neat stuff! I'd love to see more sharp volumes though, your use of brush makes the outline of your chracters quite blurry from upclose.

Spline? What is that?
For the blurry outline, any tips to fix that? Because o tried to make it not blur but i dont seem to know how to do it

Now i decided i wanted to make myself a proffesional concept artist (which is like so far away), so i decided to draw everyday, i just hope that it wont cause a negative effect without someone's guidance

@Mr.Goblin do you have any tips what practice should i do to improve? To be honest im kinda just blindly practicing right now so would like to ask what should i do to walk this payh

 

[Hantoo]

I was at somewhere with terrible Internet connection so I couldnt post anything here
I decided to Spend more time on this one piece, It is still WIP and is not done, Im still working on it It is the Troll Warbringer designed by Kybri0 where he requested me to make a model for him, I made a nice little concept art as well for fun

Any tips or things to improve please tell me, I need some guidance in giving him texture and lighting, if you guys can give me any tips it would be great, now It feels like I only apply Ambient Occlusion to him only

This is probably the drawing I spent the longest time working on
Any Critics and tips would be gladly accepted, be harsh if need, but please gives useful pointers that I can use to improve my work, I really want to improve my skills.

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Le Model Screenshot

UPDATE:
Somehow the Feather is really distracting, Im not sure how to draw them, anyone have any idea how i can fix this?

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[Naze]

Damn Hayate it looks awesome!

You said you want some criticism on your 2d art, well dude, you're doing a great work already, but you really need to get those sharp volumes right. The edges of the shapes you draw are too blurre/sluggish/undefined, they need to have sharper edges to look more solid and firm. Like doing some serious shading.

I took some random troll fan art from to use as example of shading: here. The highlights/shadows have a very defined line, look at how the author made it so dramatic.

In my amateurish eyes, this shading thing would be your next step. Anyway, I really enjoyed the concept and execution (specially the model, wow), so congratulations on that, really!

 

[Hantoo]

I hope this looks not as blur :V

 

[PrinceYaser]

I hope this looks not as blur :V
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I love how you've done/sharped the wooden texture of the mask. Good job!

Subscribing.

 

[Hantoo]

After some guide and a shitload of useful tips from MR Goblin, I decided to redo the whole thing, starting from the raptor

I probably going to rework on the troll as well, but since im not gonna change the pose to much, I want to focus on the raptor now

Im very grateful for Mr Goblin tips

Troll

 

[Kyrbi0]

Looks like the tips helped; that is loads improved. Excellent!

 

[Hantoo]

Im abit stucked not sure how to go further detail (Aside from finishing the current details) but i will see what i can do

 

[stein123]

Cool stuff! and great redesign! *-* lovin all of them so far ♥

 

[Hantoo]

Decided to Put on pause on the digital art and back to the basics,

Decided to draw 200 cubes

Now on my 22th cube, Hopefully It will look better as I draw

 

[Hantoo]

Troll Raptor More progress

 

[Hantoo]

I've been doing a shitload of blind contour (which doesnt look nice at all) practices, alot of geometric shape fundalmental practices and some perspective practices and some still lifes, so I didnt able to post much things here, but anyway, just showing some of my practices here that isn't too shit

Hopefully I will come back to digital and start painting again in 2 - 3 weeks , With a slightly better fundamentals

Any thing to suggest for me to add into my practice is welcome
I keep drawing the same object over and over again not sure if that is an efficient way to improve or not

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[Naze]

Hah that's good, these practices are always a nice thing to do.

I keep drawing the same object over and over again not sure if that is an efficient way to improve or not

Well I guess that if you keep them comming, but each time increasingly more challenging, you'll progress more (all that "getting out of comfort zone" thing).

 

[Kyrbi0]

I've heard it can be an effective tool for self-improvement.

By the way the rest of your images aren't loading for me.

 

[Hantoo]

Amaterasu from Smite, I like her so much I played too much smite recently, i wonder if I have a crush on her. lel, my life is screwed

think I made her hair too long

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[Kyrbi0]

Sick

 

[Hantoo]

WIP

I really need to get back to finish my old stuff
I have some "not finishing my artwork issue"

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[Hantoo]

Finished Lucio Fan Art
It's taking forever so i just wrap it up

Lucio FanArt

 

[Kyrbi0]

Noice!

 

[Hantoo]

I rarely use color pencil, but i decided to use it, i probably will use it more, and also try out watercolor as well

 

[Hantoo]

WIP

 

[Kyrbi0]

Noice, noice

 

[Hantoo]

And... finally completed... whew,

Fairy

 

[Kyrbi0]

Very nice!

 

[Hantoo]

Troll Raptor

 

[Kyrbi0]

Noice!

 

[Naze]

It's fine if you make your art in a 4961x3506 canvas, but you need to resize it down when publishing it as final! =P It'll help both the viewer (less image size, loading time, etc) and you (it'll look waay less blurry). Great improvement on the troll nonetheless!