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» Vengeancekael:[c] 「Profile :: Message :: Hive Staff」 |
» Date:[c] 「28/Feb/2013 14:56:23」 |
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Runemage has female voice.
Gnome Engineer does not have a fitting voice either.
No custom spells.
Messy quest log. (No capitalization, colorizing, too much written, -> Use shorter sentences)
In-game credits are missing. (Quest)
Lacking terrain. (Needs to be more filled, add shrubbery, different terrain heights, flowers, etc.)
Not to demotivate you, but your skills are at a very early stage and you don't seem to have any real original ideas.
Tone your skills in terraining, but especially in triggering a lot more and you'll be able to import custom spells&systems, make your own spells, etc.
Check out the tutorials section for help: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tutorials/
[Moderated version: 25th February]
Gnome Engineer does not have a fitting voice either.
No custom spells.
Messy quest log. (No capitalization, colorizing, too much written, -> Use shorter sentences)
In-game credits are missing. (Quest)
Lacking terrain. (Needs to be more filled, add shrubbery, different terrain heights, flowers, etc.)
Not to demotivate you, but your skills are at a very early stage and you don't seem to have any real original ideas.
Tone your skills in terraining, but especially in triggering a lot more and you'll be able to import custom spells&systems, make your own spells, etc.
Check out the tutorials section for help: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tutorials/
[Moderated version: 25th February]
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