Gnoll Wars 1.3

[Moderator]

12:20, 13th Aug 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[Deleted member 177737]

Can we get a description of the game besides your at war and your village blew up...

 

[Spo]

Well i could not think of anything >_>

 

[R.Gaming_Strike]

All units I made - sounds like Yoda.
Well, the map needs a lot of improvements. The current quality of the map is not enough for aproval in my opinion.

Fix the terrain, the description, balance it ( bad work on goldmines and the positions )
and maybe it get aproved once.
But its only my opinion.

So - don´t give up the work. =)

{EDIT}
And one suggestions. Update the map with the "UPDATE" button, not with "Upload a new map"

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Follow the rules!

 

[Dezibell]

All units I made - sounds like Yoda.
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*Spam begin*
Thats a participle....
Double Post there
*Spam end*

looks nice. will try it.

 

[Spo]

Bump

 

[reason 3]

This review is made by reason 3, if you have any questions or anything else to comment feel free to Private Message me.You may also ask me to review your map again.

An altered melee featuring a new gnoll race and a war between 2 of their villages.

[+]I liked the terrain a lot, nothing to comment there.
[+]About its balance i can't say much...it looked fine.
[+]Your new race seemed ok, but my opinion is that you have to improve a bit more.Buildings didn't exactly match the gnoll race.
[-]Your decorator idea seemed nice but you certainly have to make him able to construct more doodads and by the way construct them properly cause right now their construction stops at 1/50 hitpoints.You should also a detonate abilty to him.
[-]You don't have a proper description and you also have a few typos in your map.One of them even in the loadscren!
[-]AI didn't do anything than gather gold.That is certainly not very good.
[-]Map file size seemed big for a melee map.


Overall rating:2/5
I would suggest you to develop your race more, you can replace your buildings with others that would match the gnoll race better.
~ r3

 

[Evillizard]

Nice map spo. If you need any help trigger or anything, I'm willing to help.

 

[Cweener]

Mass Purging Template Version 4.3
Needs Fix.

Reason for not approving:
Your description needs work before this can even be reviewed, because description is part of the rules.