Frozen to Death

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Moderator: -Kobas-
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Date: 05-Oct-13 (14:47:10)​

Critical Errors:​

Map presentation is poor or missing.

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Map Status: Rejected
(1/5) Unacceptable​

 

[taavidude]

terrain 1/5
creeps 2/5
gameplay 3/5
hero 1/5 because it doesnt have any spells
overall rating 2/5
really bad map!
suggestions:
terrain: absolutley horrible there are only small mountain things and everything is snow you should add more different tiles and there are no trees.
hero: if it has levels you should give him some spells.
creeps: there are too many of them and some are so strong that without spells they are really hard to kill!

voting for rejection

 

[Screamernail]

i tried. But you shall se updates.

 

[The_New_Divide]

@taavidude: Can you give suggestions to the author please, when you think, the map need to improve. Its help more then a judgement only.

@lolkevin: Can you improve the mapdiscription with screenshots, [self=http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/misc.php?do=bbcode]bb-codes[/self] and more Gameplayinformations please?

 

[Legal_Ease]

The Hive Workshop Official

Map Reviewer: Legal_Ease Map Name: Frozen to Death Map Author: lolkevin Your map lacks an acceptable description and will be rejected if its not improved. You can make one from scratch using BBcode key or you can try a Map Discription Templates. Also, screenshots are practically a must. See http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tutorial-submission-283/how-add-screenshot-your-map-description-241054/#post2416435. Site Rules Map still in development? Make a thread in the Map Development Section for feedback. All other Tutorials. Contact: (Visitor Message) / (Private Message) / (Map Reviewers)

 

[Screamernail]

already did.

 

[Daffa]

The Hive Workshop Official

Map Reviewer: Daffa the Mage Map Name: Frozen to Death Map Author: lolkevin Originality I don't see anything really different with this from big RPG, except it's too straight and boring. Score: 1/100 Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection! Presentation Your Description is very lacking. Credits for all Icons and used Models are missing. this fits more as RPG genre. There's no ingame tips. no Information at Quest menu and Loading Screen. Score: 4/100 Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection! Design Map Preview and Loading Screen needs for some big revamping. Tooltips are lacking in many places. Skills are not fitting well. There are many other, but these 4 are main stuff I can point out. Score: 3/100 Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection! Terrain Terrain are too straightfoward, but for the least, it's a bit decorated for the least. Score: 34/100 Triggers Trigger are messy and can be optimized. Some trigger are leaking, fix them! There's no need for tons of triggers, you can have less and still get no performance bugs, this is mostly the Hero Level part. Score: 18/100 Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection! Object Data Unit fits well with it's statistic. However, Hero is Ability less in the beginning, this is not good for heroes. Also, the map lacks of variation of units, this is also bad. Score: 42/100 Gameplay Don't really bother checking, it's too straight and boring. Score: 0/100 Critical Error -> Vote for Rejection! Description is very lacking, you can use the Map Description Templates for the description. Also, since map is still on development, it's not allowed at Map Section, please use Map Development Forum instead. Site Rules Map still in development? Make a thread in the Map Development Section for feedback. Need help with triggers/memory leaks? Make a thread in the Triggers & Scripts Section. Got any World Editor related questions? Make a thread in the World Editor Help Zone Section. Final Score: 14.571/100 1/5 Vote for Rejection Contact: (Visitor Message) / (Private Message) / (Map Reviewers)

 

[Binsu]

The Hive Workshop Official

Map Reviewer: Hell_Master Map Name: Frozen to Death Map Author: lolkevin Wont rate this for it is really a badly executed RPG. Misses a proper story, no introduction for the map itself or the hero to better understand the aim of the map, bad presentation at Hive (no usage of BB Codes and provides only Author Notes and not on Map Descriptions), bad terrain (is flat and needs more aising and lowering) and also needs more tile variations and decorations and props), its weird having a Peasant hero getting well with Ghouls which in common sense that Undead and Humans are deep enemies (much deduction in Object Data if I would to formally review this) and that is all. Site Rules Map still in development? Make a thread in the Map Development Section for feedback. Tutorials Final Score: 0.000/100 0/5 Vote for Rejection Contact: (Visitor Message) / (Private Message) / (Map Reviewers)

 

[Legal_Ease]

already did.

Ok, that's fine. You don't have to do anything else. A moderator will remove it once they get around to it.