Forsaken Lieutenant

This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.


Second try for Timeless Texturing event.
Enjoy! :)

Credits to Arowanna (for tips and reference about preview) and ~Nightmare (for reviews).
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Forsaken Lieutenant (Texture)

Forsaken Lieutenant512 (Texture)

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~Nightmare
It looks much better now. But still here's some points (since you given up on updating this :) ) for your future works. * The shield looks much better now versus the previous version which is very random and weird. A minor error is that the trim on...
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It looks much better now. But still here's some points (since you given up on updating this :) ) for your future works.

* The shield looks much better now versus the previous version which is very random and weird. A minor error is that the trim on the upper part is cut off.
* Remember that light comes from above. The golden trim's highlights suggests that there are multiple light sources which is weird.
* The boots are mushy, it could be fix by smoothing it. It looks very messy at the moment. For references of what i mean of messy try to visit my Royal Mage skin :p (it looks messy XD)
* Not a fan of having both the shoulder pads and biceps has the same horizontal lines design. Would love some contrast with designs.
* Team color is very flat, you can shade the alpha channel fyi. But it is understandable as you're just starting out.
* I love the helm, the color seems to be pretty not matched with the armor
* Loved also that you've added another color.
* Also:
Import path(s):
  • Textures\Footman.blp
Changes the following object(s):
  • Footman

All in all, I loved that you've followed some advices (not all). But in your future skin (if there would be) please keep in mind this points. I am granting this an approval. Congratulations! Looking forward for your next.
 
* Remember that light comes from above. The golden trim's highlights suggests that there are multiple light sources which is weird.
Will definitely fix it.
For references of what i mean of messy try to visit my Royal Mage skin :p (it looks messy XD)
What? God you mean the reference is also messy? XD
* Not a fan of having both the shoulder pads and biceps has the same horizontal lines design. Would love some contrast with designs.
I'll see what I can do.
* Team color is very flat, you can shade the alpha channel fyi. But it is understandable as you're just starting out.
Yeah agreed. Will fix it.
advices (not all). But in your future skin (if there would be) please keep in mind this points. I am granting this an approval. Congratulations! Looking forward for your next.
Thanks! Will keep these points in mind. :)
 
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