first terrain

[13LUR]

My first terrain made for just a screen shot.

 

[Supermj]

VERY pritty... no imports?

 

[FamousPker49]

Nice job, it seems as terrainers, everyone wants to do something underwater lol

 

[Belgarath]

Nice, but I think there's been too many underwater terrains lately ...

 

[Gilles]

I agree, that there are too many. I really like this one though. The use of doodads is awesome. I just suggest using sunken ruins rocks, and adding rays of moonlight.

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

This looks better than many of the other underwater terrains lately. You actually used fish and such and the general doodad use and placement is fine.

Things to improve...
Tile variation could be improved, it is okay but still could be improved. Also the ship is too small compared to everything else.

 

[13LUR]

changed some things.

 

[The_wand_mirror]

Christ, my first terrains looked like abominations compared to this lol

 

[Craka_J]

Very nice work for a first timer! The temple in the background impresses me, since you're new at this terraining thing.

One thing you can improve is the main path leading to the temple in the middle of the screen. It looks very empty. Sure it has some stuff, but I think it needs more. Exadurate the terrain sometimes; it can have a nice look sometimes. Needs more tile variation as well.

But overall, this is very good. Especially for a first time terrainer. +Rep!
~Craka_J

 

[Gilles]

I agree with the raging about the boat. You should make it larger. I also thing that you could add some growth to the path. It's a bit too "clean".

 

[The_wand_mirror]

This looks better than many of the other underwater terrains lately. You actually used fish and such and the general doodad use and placement is fine.

Things to improve...
Tile variation could be improved, it is okay but still could be improved. Also the ship is too small compared to everything else.

Do people like you that always brabble about the tilevariation think the terrain of 'Desert of Exile' is great? Because rly the tile variation of that map is 'way-over-the-top'

 

[4rankie]

Wow man I was no where near as good as this on my first attempt to terrain. The temple is really nice and you placed your doodads perfectly, the tile variation could be a bit better but excellent job, keep this up.

~4rankie~

+REP

 

[Gilles]

Do people like you that always brabble about the tilevariation think the terrain of 'Desert of Exile' is great? Because rly the tile variation of that map is 'way-over-the-top'

Can't remember, I'll take a look. I remember liking the terrain. Tile variation is a huge part. It helps so much.

 

[13LUR]

added some "tile variation" and "stuff" to the center path. and made the ship bigger.

oh and got rid of the moonlight, cause it looked stupid.

 

[Supermj]

Even better!
Love the bubbles.

 

[Gilles]

I think this is a finished piece of work! Well done!

 

[Craka_J]

Well there are improvements that can be done to it. But I guess it is safe to declare that it is a completed piece.
~Craka_J