Eternal Quest : The demon's revenge

[Moderator]

14:09, 13th Aug 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[LoRd_ArThAs]

I'm downloading it, when i play it i'll tell you the results.
(haha, just recently posted)

 

[selamiboss]

Pls rate me.And who vote me even don't knwing the map?!!!!!!

 

[selamiboss]

oh and i give +rep to you because you are the first to comment.LoRd_ArThAs

 

[LoRd_ArThAs]

Jeje, thanks, and someone voted you without knowing the map? that's weird (pd: was me)
So, very good map, is it your first?

 

[krisserz]

And you will get -rep, because you`ve double-posted. Use EDIT button instead of sending 2 posts in a row.

 

[selamiboss]

It isn't

It is my 1st map on here,but if i remember well i maked around 11 maps.I'm not a very good maper,just going in with triggering and object editing.

And i don't think it's a crime to duble post!!!!

Edit:Sry for wrong spelling im typing really fast and sometimes i forgot to check my spelling

 

[krisserz]

I would suggest you improving the description, else moderator will reject this map.
(Map Rules - Read Presentation)
(Tutorial)

EDIT: Ahh, and add Category

EDIT 2:

And i don't think it's a crime to duble post!!!!

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[Warhunter]

Here, on hive there is a crime to double post.

 

[selamiboss]

Ok i understood,pls download the map and rate it.Don't vote without seeing it!!!!!!

Edit:+REP to Warhunter for saying me this is a crime on hive.

 

[krisserz]

Jeje, thanks, and someone voted you without knowing the map? that's weird (pd: was me)

Psst, he said it was he...

EDIT: I played it and here is my review:
+/- Playable
+/- Terrain is good enaugh
- Why the hell most of the heroes are Paladins?
- Not fully in English (Red hero fireball (I think) description is in other language)
- Some spells have "Tooltip missing"
- Toooo easy
- Reduce the number of books
- Descriptions of spells are bad
- Bossfights are nothing special, just hitting bosses
- Basic Wc3 items
- Boring intro (it`s pointless)

Overall so far the map gets 1/5 and vote for rejection, mostly because the map is not fully in English, what is prohibited at Hive.

Presentation
All maps must be made in English, must not contain overwhelmingly bad spelling or grammar, must contain a valid author and map name, and must contain a well-written description to give the reader a good idea of what the map is about. Imports, terrain, camera, and other visuals should complement the game.

Make it fully English, repair missing tooltips and I think I will give it 2.

 

[Warhunter]

another thing, I suggest you to remove your doubble post as soon as possible, the moderators may give you -rep if you don't.

 

[selamiboss]

K

K going to edit it tommorow remember this is a beta.!!!!

 

[VampireofBlood]

Well for a beta this seems pretty much alpha...

So my Review:
+ The Triggering is very easy, but it works.
+ Terrain could be better, but you at least made an ok Terrain for 1/4 of the map..
+ The Idea is old, but it's your first real Upload, so i won't judge this.

- Tooltips are Horrible
- You made alot of grammar and spell mistakes
- The Heroraces aren't very diversified
- As i told, 3/4 of the Terrain is horrible
- The Description lacks very much
- You've doubble posted


All in all this will be a 1/5, but i think you will work on it, so hurry up