-Elenai's Comic Productions-

[Kimbo]

Okay...submit this to the wow comic contest NOW.

 

[WILL THE ALMIGHTY]

Still funny. You should probably add your (real) name at the bottom and some kind of border so your comics can't get stolen.
That is, if you're serious about this and want to make many more.

But if I can suggets a few things...

1- Switch the positions of each character, so the orc (who talks first) would be to the right.

2- Make the rabbit seem like more of a desperate cause, like there's only the head left, or he's squashed. I'm not implying there should be tons of blood all over the place, just make it clear there is no way he can be revived.

3- Make the bubble text fit more in the bubble, either by enlarging the bubble and making larger traits or by making the text smaller and thinner.

These are really small changes, but they help in polish.

 

[Elenai]

Thanks for the suggestions WILL.

I am not sure about putting my real name...Same reason I dont want to put my pic up.

I may consider a border however.

@Wulfy: My comics are'nt ready to be submitted yet. They are just not good enough yet...I still need practice. But thanks again for liking them.

 

[WILL THE ALMIGHTY]

If you start making comics A LOT... as in, you're starting your own webcomic (we're talking almost commercial here), then putting your real name is a good idea.

A name can't bring problems... a picture can, but your name is just your name. I doubt that saying "Guillaume Langis" is my real name online can bring any problems.

 

[Elenai]

I see your point...

 

[THE_END]

I would like to give a public show of my thanks to Elenai for my awesome avatar!
Thanks El!

 

[Elenai]

You are most welcome THE_END.

.........
UPDATE: I have added all the comics to the first page....so..I guess you can see how the comics have evolved artisticly over...a few days.

 

[mato]

u just keep improving

 

[Modo]

I like the style with which you draw. It is really nice.

 

[General Frank]

I like the style with which you draw. It is really nice.

Me too. I really like that ..well...comic style. It fits well to the warcraft style.

 

[MySpaceBarBroke]

The dialogue is still too cliched for my tastes.

It, however, is great to see the nice ORIGINAL artwork and creative in-jokes.

 

[NearbyHermit]

Here comes MSBB with the knock out comment

 

[brad.dude03]

Here comes Brad.Dude03 with the STFU and get back on topic, or gtfo comment.

 

[Elenai]

STFU and get back on topic, or gtfo comment.

Silence Kaitech!!!

Anyways...New comic coming soon...this one will be a two paneler, and will now feature the inside jokes and little things you all love.

 

[Kuhneghetz]

Bwahaha! Funny pics.

Lets see....DVO would have gotten a miniature of his avatar....and Gilles would have gotten....a Venture Bros dvd.

Aww I was hoping for a Nintendo Wii with Mario games, and/or a hawt Princess Peach sex doll. X)

But I'll accept your gift. =)

 

[Elenai]

Thats also behind the chair DVO...
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[Kaitech[SanD]]

Hey Elenai, I tried making one with stick figures

 

[brad.dude03]

Err.... I don't really see the point of the image, nor the purpose of the dialogue box, or what exactly the characters are doing.....

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

I would ask the same question... What IS he doing? o.0

 

[Elenai]

....well....Atleast he tried to make a hand drawn comic.

 

[brad.dude03]

Yeah, but it fails in ever way: it has no point, the drawing is horrific, the dialogue non-existant, and the humor (if it was even intended) vanished without a trace.

 

[Elenai]

Hmmmz..I am wondering if this comic wasnt meant to be sarcastic.

 

[brad.dude03]

He said he was seriously going to try a hand-drawn comic in his thread before it closed, and he doesn't know what sarcasm is, leading to the conclusion that this was a genuine (but horribly sad) attempt at a comic.

 

[Elenai]

Oh dear..........

 

[WILL THE ALMIGHTY]

Hmmm... we'll see. I doubt Kaitech has such a little amount of talent.

 

[MySpaceBarBroke]

That couldn't possibly be serious. That was failure of Firelord213 proportions.

 

[Gilles]

I will attempt a comic in MS paint. If I can do it, anyone can. I have no artistic talent, or much wit.

This is going badly. No ideas.

 

[frostwhisper]

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[Sacrimo]

Funniest thing I have ever saw

 

[TheDivineBoss]

And weirdest...

El I have to *Has trouble to say it* it, I like the sick UHUUHUHH-Omedy of youUUHUHh comics... There I said it!

 

[Kaitech[SanD]]

Well, see what I mean Elenai? Total waste of time. "Ugh fails" "Lol noob suxxor"

 

[frostwhisper]

My troll pwns all. End of story.
Oh, and El, keep those comics comin'

 

[Pyritie]

Well, see what I mean Elenai? Total waste of time. "Ugh fails" "Lol noob suxxor"

Mainly because they were stickmen. Elenai's actually resemble something.

 

[brad.dude03]

And it contains genuine writing and humor. The dialogue is realistic, believable, and funny. The characters are well-drawn (three dimensional and proportional) and the backgrounds are simplistic but easily establish the setting for the comic. Each comic has a purpose, a general idea, and every detail in the comic builds around this idea, adding to it, to bring it success.

 

[TheDivineBoss]

Just like mangas?

I like mangas.

 

[Pyritie]

And it contains genuine writing and humor. The dialogue is realistic, believable, and funny. The characters are well-drawn (three dimensional and proportional) and the backgrounds are simplistic but easily establish the setting for the comic. Each comic has a purpose, a general idea, and every detail in the comic builds around this idea, adding to it, to bring it success.

Elenai's were drawn in MS Paint. They are definitely not three-dimensional.

Wrong thread?

 

[TheDivineBoss]

Don't know, you ask mé. But I'm wondering... Do you see on the Elenai ft. Santa-picture a present for me?

 

[Pyritie]

Nope.

__________

 

[brad.dude03]

Pyritie, I'm saying that Elenai draws his character to look proportionally 3D, as in they aren't your typical stick-figure style 2D bodies, etc.

You know how an image can look 3D even though it's on a 2D surface? This is what i'm referring to.

 

[HINDYhat]

I LOVE the third one. It's awesome heh

YOU fight like a dairy farmer! xD

 

[TheDivineBoss]

I think he draws them in 2-3D, AKA 2,5D, and they're highly detailed stick figures, how's about that?

 

[Pyritie]

Oh god not this 2.5D argument again.

 

[Elenai]

Elenai's were drawn in MS Paint. They are definitely not three-dimensional.

Actually Py...I created them in Paintshop.

 

[DaedraEater]

Elenai sir... YOU.... ROCK... HARD!!! lol, but still your comics are awesome (especially taurenvself, thepandthingyfight, and krug). Keep making more... pleeeease (O)-(O) (wide eyed glasses boy, )

 

[WILL THE ALMIGHTY]

Meh, I just hand draw them, scan them and color them on the computer.

 

[Elenai]

Well...If I get a tablet for Christmas...and get used to it just imagine the possibilities.

 

[WILL THE ALMIGHTY]

Same here. I'd love to have a tablet, though I'm a lot better with simple pencils...

 

[Pyritie]

Tablets are very good. I highly recommend one.

Especially if it's A4 sized. Those are the best.

 

[Naze]

Why does the characters of your comics fight with vegetables?

 

[Elenai]

It adds a little bit of comedy to the over all theme. And its kinda like one of those little easter eggs that makes my comics unique.