DwarvenPirate

[Moderator]

13:35, 1st Oct 2013
BlinkBoy: Yargh! In the name of david john's locker tis blinkyApproved. 4/5 Tested in-game.

 

[Peacegetter]

nice model but the gun is far too big for my taste

 

[Lordofth3cl4n]

haha nice model but yeah i agree with peacegetter the gun is a little bit to big still good work

 

[takakenji]

the gun is way 2 big even for warcraft 3

 

[stonneash]

Review

Pros & Cons
+Nice Model
+Nice Use of Texture
+Arrgggg!
-3 A bunch of Bugs (Details in suggestions).

Rating
3.5/5

Suggestions
Fix minor bugs.

Details

1. Stand - 3 Animation bug
When the Pirate places rifle on shoulder, his arm\hand is in a higher postion than its supposed to be.

2. Death Animation bug
The Death animation looks like this. please give it a nice, good remake.

3. Giant rifle
The rifle's barrel is bigger than the pirate's head with the beard

4. Empty shells bug
When the pirate attacks and and empty shell falls on the ground, the shell isn't 2 sided so its kinda wired

5. Decay bones animation bug
Smoke particle show out from no where for no reason, just smoke

6. Walk animation bug
Pirate's hand punches though the rifle to the other side

Comments
Dat Rifle, Nice pirate. good job.

 

[Sky Green]

He'll punch Deathwing in the face and steal his gold. Anywho, good model, altough his hat and his head look kinda squished. Especially the hat could be a bit bigger. Or he could get a fez. Fezes are cool.

 

[PROXY]

He's way too thin for a dwarf.

 

[stonneash]

He's way too thin for a dwarf.

He is way to thin that I almost mentioned it as a bug in my review

 

[Uncle Fester]

thank you all for your comments and feedback. I'll make him soon a bit fater and the gun a bit shorter, though it's not that much larger than the rifleman's.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Lookin' pretty good, but his head's a bit too small for a dwarf.

 

[Nichilus]

Idd, his small head and thin body makes it look like a regular pirate with beard... Brownbeard

 

[~DARK~]

Holy Sh** very huge gun

 

[Uncle Fester]

Lookin' pretty good, but his head's a bit too small for a dwarf.

ty to small? I mean, the rifleman's head isn't that much bigger either.

Idd, his small head and thin body makes it look like a regular pirate with beard... Brownbeard

rofl did you DL the model? If yes, when did you DL it? It has been updated already once (gun made smaller and body slightly fatter)

Holy Sh** very huge gun

still to huge or did you just look @ the screenie?

 

[stonneash]

still to huge or did you just look @ the screenie?

I think the gun looks fine.
am just disappointed that you ignored the bugs I mentioned in my Review, I know they are mostly minor bugs but they need to be done sooner or later.

 

[Uncle Fester]

I think the gun looks fine.
am just disappointed that you ignored the bugs I mentioned in my Review, I know they are mostly minor bugs but they need to be done sooner or later.

I didn't ignore them i fixed the issue with the hand now. The one during the walk anim has to be lived with it's the same with the usual rifleman. It would require a complete re-animation of the left hand during walk anim.
About death anim: where exactly did you see a smoke there? Ingames or in Magos?

 

[stonneash]

I didn't ignore them i fixed the issue with the hand now. The one during the walk anim has to be lived with it's the same with the usual rifleman. It would require a complete re-animation of the left hand during walk anim.
About death anim: where exactly did you see a smoke there? Ingames or in Magos?

via the feature "View in 3D", look like after you last update it doesn't seem to be there anymore..

Now he looks better after the update good job
5\5

 

[Uncle Fester]

via the feature "View in 3D", look like after you last update it doesn't seem to be there anymore..

Now he looks better after the update good job
5\5

ty View in 3D? What program did you use for this? If it is Warcraft III Viewer, keep in mind that it's not the best program for viewing models. It doesn't open patch file (like Hero Tinker or Flame Lord) and it often shows particles poorly or none at any and sometimes the particles even bug in it. I can't say how it performs ingames. My WC3 Editor and game aren't working (my laptop crushed and i can't find the CDs so i copied it from the laptop's hard drive to my PC).

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Now looks much better, gj!

 

[stonneash]

ty View in 3D? What program did you use for this? If it is Warcraft III Viewer, keep in mind that it's not the best program for viewing models. It doesn't open patch file (like Hero Tinker or Flame Lord) and it often shows particles poorly or none at any and sometimes the particles even bug in it. I can't say how it performs ingames. My WC3 Editor and game aren't working (my laptop crushed and i can't find the CDs so i copied it from the laptop's hard drive to my PC).

View in 3d Feature is a feature on the hiveworkshop, I doesn't appear to work on all devices, it on the top right somewhere around the update buton, if you couldn't find it try refreshing the page.

Edit:

Image

 

[Uncle Fester]

Now looks much better, gj!

ty

View in 3d Feature is a feature on the hiveworkshop, I doesn't appear to work on all devices, it on the top right somewhere around the update buton, if you couldn't find it try refreshing the page.

Edit:

Image

Tried refreshing the page, but it doesn't appear @ all. Not even @ other ppl's ressources. But thx for the tip anyway.

 

[stonneash]

ty

Tried refreshing the page, but it doesn't appear @ all. Not even @ other ppl's ressources. But thx for the tip anyway.

Weird, what device do you use to browse the Hive?

 

[Uncle Fester]

Weird, what device do you use to browse the Hive?

Mozilla Firefox.

 

[stonneash]

Mozilla Firefox.

I was talking about the Device no the browser, like a Desktop or an Ipad.\
But mentioning that you use firefox means you probably use a Desktop\Laptop, maybe you should talk to an Admin about this.

 

[Uncle Fester]

I was talking about the Device no the browser, like a Desktop or an Ipad.\
But mentioning that you use firefox means you probably use a Desktop\Laptop, maybe you should talk to an Admin about this.

Oh, nop. No, i use a PC. I used a laptop before, but never rly looked after that view in 3D. This aside, maybe it has to do with the OS (operating system) of my PC, it's an old Windows XP.

 

[stonneash]

Oh, nop. No, i use a PC. I used a laptop before, but never rly looked after that view in 3D. This aside, maybe it has to do with the OS (operating system) of my PC, it's an old Windows XP.

Probably OS, mine is Windows 7

 

[Uncle Fester]

Probably OS, mine is Windows 7

yeah, i think so too. My laptop had windows 7 and i think it had such an option, i'm not rly sure. I never looked for a view 3D option

 

[stonneash]

yeah, i think so too. My laptop had windows 7 and i think it had such an option, i'm not rly sure. I never looked for a view 3D option

Well it just a faser way than downloading and extracting, then checking via Magos or warcraft 3 Viewer.

 

[FUJI]

Pretty good and looks nice 4/5!!! Great Work!

 

[WhiteDeath]

He has no eye patch, that is a huge mistake, I am truly disappointed!

 

[Uncle Fester]

Well it just a faser way than downloading and extracting, then checking via Magos or warcraft 3 Viewer.

yeah

Pretty good and looks nice 4/5!!! Great Work!

ty

He has no eye patch, that is a huge mistake, I am truly disappointed!

not every pirate has an eye patch....my ogre pirate has one

 

[InfernalTater]

His legs look too long to be a dwarf.

Still, good job and creative use of textures to create an entirely different yet appropriate rifleman.

4/5.

 

[PsycoMarauder]

is there team color? if so i will use this in risk next gen and risk devo

 

[Uncle Fester]

His legs look too long to be a dwarf.

Still, good job and creative use of textures to create an entirely different yet appropriate rifleman.

4/5.

hehe thx a lot

is there team color? if so i will use this in risk next gen and risk devo

there is, but it's not much. The red thingie wraped around his chest that looks like a belt or so is TCed. It's hardly visible in the screenie.

 

[FUJI]

The gun size is like a size of the dwarf's head that really looks funny DDD!

 

[Gamegear]

Fantastshit )

i like the model soo cool ))
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question: Kael's animation is GOOD for gunner heroes?

 

[Uncle Fester]

The gun size is like a size of the dwarf's head that really looks funny DDD!

lol

i like the model soo cool ))
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question: Kael's animation is GOOD for gunner heroes?

ty

yes, Kael's, or generally, the Blood Mage's anims are good for gunner heroes, but only for those using handguns (i.e. pistols and revolvers). But a few of them would need a few minor changes....

 

[Systemfre1]

Perhaps some TC on his armbands?
Apart from that this model looks awesome

 

[Uncle Fester]

Perhaps some TC on his armbands?
Apart from that this model looks awesome

i know, i kinda forgot about the TC while making it. Initially, i wanted to make him as a creep unit but then i canged my mind into making him a unit for all players. Thx a lot, i'm glad you like it.

 

[Gamegear]

yes, Kael's, or generally, the Blood Mage's anims are good for gunner heroes, but only for those using handguns (i.e. pistols and revolvers). But a few of them would need a few minor changes....

yes coz i saw some banging attack animations with him )
im jealous to people whos good on making models with GUNS

im not good with that ideas only in my mind hehehe

MODEL 5/5

 

[Uncle Fester]

yes coz i saw some banging attack animations with him )
im jealous to people whos good on making models with GUNS

im not good with that ideas only in my mind hehehe

MODEL 5/5

Well, then just give it a few tries. Read the tutorials carefully, then play a bit around with the different programs and after that choose which ones you're going to use. If you want to make models only for you, you can try everything, but if you want to make models for the Hive that get approved and used, they must have certain qualities. I'd recommend you therefor to start with attachments, especially weapons like maces, swords, daggers and maybe polearms. They're much easier and inanimate, i.e. they don't need to be animated. Trust me, with the time and enough private practice you will learn too how to make your own nice stuff and you'll also develope your own style, which will kinda be your signature.
The secret is just to try it out and not to be discouraged if a model gets rejected. It will take some time untill you make your first one that will be approved. The secret is only a combination of practice (i.e. modelling skills), innovation, creativity and patience.

 

[Gamegear]

Well, then just give it a few tries. Read the tutorials carefully, then play a bit around with the different programs and after that choose which ones you're going to use. If you want to make models only for you, you can try everything, but if you want to make models for the Hive that get approved and used, they must have certain qualities. I'd recommend you therefor to start with attachments, especially weapons like maces, swords, daggers and maybe polearms. They're much easier and inanimate, i.e. they don't need to be animated. Trust me, with the time and enough private practice you will learn too how to make your own nice stuff and you'll also develope your own style, which will kinda be your signature.
The secret is just to try it out and not to be discouraged if a model gets rejected. It will take some time untill you make your first one that will be approved. The secret is only a combination of practice (i.e. modelling skills), innovation, creativity and patience.

i tried mine ) check out my sword LOL hahaha
well, i can do some Textures but not 3d's ) "not yet"

 

[Uncle Fester]

i tried mine ) check out my sword LOL hahaha
well, i can do some Textures but not 3d's ) "not yet"

i will check it out later. Hehe, you will, with the time.

 

[Zed]

Yarrrrrrrrrr 5/5

 

[Uncle Fester]

Yarrrrrrrrrr 5/5

Arrrrrrgh! Thx

 

[Lordlycan]

nice execution !