ugh, please change the gun, something other than a blunderbuss, also make the beard brown or red, since foot soldiers are less experienced than other dwarves and are (i think) younger, why not ?
If not that then perhaps change the head. See what the dwarf king's head looks on this, who knows it may become good !
TC would be nice too but DON'T overdo it.
also, why not make his amour something other than leather ?
Edit: never mind about the beard. silly me, i didn't check the screen shot throughly.