Dragon Peak

[Lag_Reviews]

Fix Description please P:

To Tusky: I can see you are trying to become a master map maker and are trying to do everything right but here are a few tips that will not only stop your map from being rejected it will also get you more downloads.

Bad description = rejection = no downloads! Fix the description please!

Things you could add to the description:

• Credits
• Screenshots
• Background info
• Gameplay
• Change-log
• Youtube video
• Upcoming update log
• What makes this unique from all other melee build a base type maps?

If you need more help on the description go here: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/tutorial-submission-283/importance-description-127031/#post1117301

Just a few things to make the map description 100%.

Also you could add a custom preview image to your map to make it look a bit more inviting and to make people want to download it more.

PS: I vote for rejection! until the description is fixed.

Hope I helped and can't wait to see this map scale to even bigger heights,
Lag_Reviews

PS: Good luck with the map I'll download it one the description becomes interesting.

 

[Ale_tuskarr]

This is not an angel arena... It's a melee map. Normal map where you build stuff...

I have no credits to give because I made it all by myself

 

[Lag_Reviews]

Im sorry and you could still improve description

This is not an angel arena... It's a melee map. Normal map where you build stuff...

I have no credits to give because I made it all by myself

Yo thanks for the quick reply. I didn't mean to say it was an angel arena type map, that came from my old post that I had copied and pasted into this one and forgot to edit that bit out.

Also you could take the time time to improve the description with what I had suggested above and add a custom preview image?

Plus you could state in the description somewhere that all credits go to yourself as you made the whole map, then we would know.

Anyhow thanks for replying,
Lag_Reviews!

PS: Will download and review when the description is better as for now it just sounds like a normal melee build a base type map with nothing spectacular and unique in it.

 

[Septimus]

Bad description = rejection = no downloads! Fix the description please!

His description ain't that bad, but it ain't that horrible either since it explain most of the content in the map. It was just that his description was way too plain, boring and messy.

As for Ale_tuskarr, you can view this sample of my map thread to see how a sample description goes.

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/maps-564/garuda-ruins-95423/?prev=u=Septimus&r=20&page=2

Also you could take the time time to improve the description with what I had suggested above and add a custom preview image?

Melee map does not need custom preview image. It just need a screenshot to let people have a look at how the terrain look like.

Plus you could state in the description somewhere that all credits go to yourself as you made the whole map, then we would know.

Credit are only needed if there is a sources that are not make by him.

 

[Ale_tuskarr]

I have updated the description and added a small screenshot. I hope it's enough...

 

[Septimus]

1 screenshot ain't sufficient, especially when they barely show 1 small ramp.

Also, use hidden tag for screenshot such as this below

click this

you have been rick roll.

 

[Ale_tuskarr]

Ok I got it the description sucks...now, is there any map reviewer around? :| I am not going to update the description anymore...you can reject my map because of some text on a web page...

 

[Septimus]

the description ain't sucks at this moment, but it isn't that good either. It just more blah!! aka boring and dull.

if you want resources approve quicker and more ppl download your sources, i recommend you to improve it.

but then again, the decision is yours.

i would give my opinion about the map asap.

 

[Rui]

This map is decent enough to get reviewed, but I'd recommend fixing the drops. A lvl 2 permanent for a Satyr Hellcaller is just too bad.

 

[Deleted member 157129]

The terrain is aesthetically pleasing, though it's very tight making it difficult to move around. The creeps are slightly difficult to defeat early on and their drops are rather weak.
Not a big fan of the spiral in the middle, but each to his own taste, I guess.

 

[Rui]

Rui's review for "Dragon Peak"

This map breaks several of Blizzard's rules. First, creeps guarding Gold Mines should have their acquisition range set to Normal. Second, players should have sixteen large grid squares for building. Pathing-wise, there's nothing to praise about this map. There is no good location to fight except on a base with its trees cut down. I'm sorry if it comes off as harsh, but a «dragon peak» is simply a bad concept for a melee map. Melee maps need room for fighting.
I didn't even know I had posted in this map thread, but it seems I did actually warn about the Satyr Hellcaller dropping a lvl2 permanent. Apparently, it was not fixed after all this time, from which I can only assume the author doesn't plan to fix it.
My rating for this map is 2/5 (Lacking). The map is Rejected.