This map has potential but it is too bugged at the moment.
1) Player 2 does not see the story text.
2) When we attacked Turtle in the Tavern other units attacked it, too. In result, we got their items and it seemed a bit glitch or something.
3) No text at all in the Loading Screen. Why are you wasting a good space where you can inform players easily?!!
4) First impression was: What? Who?
5) Second impression was: What now?
6) ...and in the end I was not sure at all what I was doing.
7) Quests were quite ... strange. Example: You go in tavern and near someone in there. He says: "Follow me." Soon you find yourself killing a dragon turtle trapped in the tavern with that guy. Afterwards he rewards you. WtF?! Really...
As I said, it is a potential RPG map but at the moment it is too bugged and makes no sense.