Defend the Castle v3

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Vengeancekael
Date: 2012/Dec/06 20:00:34

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[EDIT]
Orcnet: see my review

 

[G A T E]

-Fix your description.You can use this templates.
-Put some screenshots/videos.It is important.
Good luck,my friend!

 

[Radicool]

I like these kind of defence maps. Here are some tips:

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  The heroes abilities are a bit dull. They are unmodified warcraft 3 abilities. I played the Demon Hunter. Try making unique abilities which people havent seen before by triggering, etc. If your new, you can always alter the description and icons to make the abilities a bit different and interesting.

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  Give the players more time before round 1 starts. I only just picked my hero and units are coming at me!

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  Make more attackers come within waves. I noticed only 2,3 or 4 units per wave. If you made it more like 10, 12 or 14 units, its more interesting (maybe only 1 unit for a boss round).

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  The terrain is not very interesting. Its very dull at the moment. I suggest you put the towers on small ramps or something. The game is called "Defend the Castle" It doesnt look like much of a castle. Just a building surrounded by plain grass, and a messy looking cliff. You could also add a couple of villager houses, light posts, etc to set the setting.

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  This point is not very important, but when I saw Kael, I thought of dota. You don't need to copy dota names, just make some up.

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  Your map has memory leaks. Memory leaks make your game laggy. This is a good read: http://world-editor-tutorials.thehelper.net/cat_usersubmit.php?view=27242

Its a few points, but as a map maker, you can never get enough feedback. Keep working on your map.

 

[R0llingstone]

I like these kind of defence maps. Here are some tips:

• 
  The heroes abilities are a bit dull. They are unmodified warcraft 3 abilities. I played the Demon Hunter. Try making unique abilities which people havent seen before by triggering, etc. If your new, you can always alter the description and icons to make the abilities a bit different and interesting.

• 
  Give the players more time before round 1 starts. I only just picked my hero and units are coming at me!

• 
  Make more attackers come within waves. I noticed only 2,3 or 4 units per wave. If you made it more like 10, 12 or 14 units, its more interesting (maybe only 1 unit for a boss round).

• 
  The terrain is not very interesting. Its very dull at the moment. I suggest you put the towers on small ramps or something. The game is called "Defend the Castle" It doesnt look like much of a castle. Just a building surrounded by plain grass, and a messy looking cliff. You could also add a couple of villager houses, light posts, etc to set the setting.

• 
  This point is not very important, but when I saw Kael, I thought of dota. You don't need to copy dota names, just make some up.

• 
  Your map has memory leaks. Memory leaks make your game laggy. This is a good read: http://world-editor-tutorials.thehelper.net/cat_usersubmit.php?view=27242

Its a few points, but as a map maker, you can never get enough feedback. Keep working on your map.

Okay, Thank you I ACCEPT Your Comment. I'll Fix It Later And Sorry
The Point that you say "the terrain is not interesting" yes. I want to change it to a new look, but its hard. I must change Region Place, Trigger, And The Position. Sorry about that

 

[Radicool]

Here, I was bored so I decided to fix some of the memory leaks in your map, and environment.

You dont have to use the map at all, just take a look at the enviornment to get an idea of improving
the setting and appeal, although I'm happy if you did want to use it and improve on it. To the critics,
it was a quick job to better the environment, don't judge it.

 

[Orcnet]

I tried the game and somehow it feels like a BETA staged map, please look at good quality type of maps that is related to hero defenses so you know the idea, also look at Radicool's statement its decent tips can help you out, and for the mean time to get more feed backs please go re-upload here: Map Development good luck with map making