Crimson Lunatics [CAMPAIGN]

[DeftheLynn]

Test This !
However, it's still needs fix

The campaign tells us about a young man named Evran that turns his life 180 degrees, at a peaceful village of Londemor, but, that village were attacked by many of unknown monsters, then an ice mage named Nagisa helped him, she tell that the monster is a Zealtor spawn, and she wanted Evran to kill Zealtor with a deadly swords from his father, Crimson Lunatics, his father once has killed Zealtor by that sword, but he's missing since he killed Zealtor, after knowing that, Evran and Nagisa begins their perilous journey to kill Zealtor.

Features :

-3 Party Members
- Evran = Male, Agility, Fire Element, Dual Swords.

Evran

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- Nagisa = Female, Intelligence, Ice Element, Staff.

Nagisa

- Argamemnon = Male, Strength, Dark Element,
Great Sword.

Argamemnon

-Equipment System
Thanks to The_Flood for his equipment system.

-Weapon Attachment
Your currently equiped weapon will be shown, you know ... like, attachment.

-Tons of Abilities
There are 3 Sets of Abilities in this campaign.
- Primary Skills = Your hero's primary skills, what else ?
- Combat Skills = Passive Abilities, can be learned when u had enough
combat points, combat points gained when your hero level up.
- Magic Skills = Each of your hero has their own elemental magic skills, can
be learned when u had enough magic points, gained when you level up.

-Abilities Bonus Damage (ABD)
This system will increase your abilities damage, so, abilities are very useful
in this campaign.

-Realistic Terrain
80% of the doodads models are created by Born2Modificate's RTES pack,
so don't ask why if this campaign size like hell.

-Party System
With this system, you can play your favourite hero without pressing the TAB
button, your party member will follow you and automaticaly casts an
abilities, this system must be activated though ....

-Depth Story
Well, since my english is bad, i need a storywritter for this campaign

-10 Slots Inventory
Each of hero will have a 10 slots of inventory.

What it's Needed :
- Modeller
- Triggerer
- Jasser
- Storywritter
- AI writter
- 2D Artist
- Describer (my english is suck, so i need em )
- Cinemator (i can't create the dialogue, bad grammar )
- Tester (any good testimonial for this map will be added here)

Current Member :
- Leader : DeftheLynn
- Terrainer : DeftheLynn
- Modeller : DeftheLynn (just for the main characters)
- Triggerer : DeftheLynn

Screenshots

Screenshots

This map isn't finished yet, even for the chapter one

Sorry for my bad english

 

[DeftheLynn]

Bump ....
Come on, i've added a screenshots

 

[Etzer]

"I think i can't handle it"?????
lolwoot spelling error, but nice terrain and models

 

[DeftheLynn]

"I think i can't handle it"?????
lolwoot spelling error, but nice terrain and models

Where did u find that ?
oh, i'm sorry for my bad grammar ...

 

[Etzer]

In the screenie.
2nd last one i think.

 

[DeftheLynn]

In the screenie.
2nd last one i think.

ohh ahahahaha
yeah i see that ..., in that case i need someone to do the dialogue things

 

[PROXY]

uhhh, there are some wow models :/ please, delete them and replace them...

 

[DeftheLynn]

uhhh, there are some wow models :/ please, delete them and replace them...

which one ? i'm sorry, i'll replace it

 

[Fingolfin]

Hmm.. what's up with people using "crimson" so frequently?
It would seem like people thinks it means "grim" or similar, but it is a colour that looks like this.

nice thing you have lots of dialouge and cutscenes though, it looks ambitious.

 

[Azurot]

I don't know why people think that lots of high-res doodads will make it look better :/

The terrain is simply put.. Poor... i like that your tried to add a semi-realistic touch to the trees being fallen down, but overall it is flat and terribly chosen models for it, if you are going to use those horribly ugly straight cliffs, then well.... don't use them at all.. make them taller smooth them out some and add a few rocks onto the face of them and the base. Sometimes the best models are the ones that are already available to you, if it were me i would have none of the high-res doodads, seeing as how they ruin the look of it SOOO much... unless EVERYTHING that you have on the screen is high-res which obviously you can't do since the filesize restrictions..

The good thing about the terrain, is your tried to make good terrain although you kinda failed at it... It just takes a lot of time and practice to make GOOD terrain, so it really is no fault of your own. But since i am a terrain nazi, i gave you this extremely harsh review, and hope to see some better\upgraded terrain from you, as you progress through and realize that you can do so much better!

 

[DeftheLynn]

Hmm.. what's up with people using "crimson" so frequently?
It would seem like people thinks it means "grim" or similar, but it is a colour that looks like this.

nice thing you have lots of dialouge and cutscenes though, it looks ambitious.

"Crimson Lunatics" is the name of the sword that the main character had, it looks darkish red, so i named it crimson
but i don't know, "crimson" sounds cool to me

I don't know why people think that lots of high-res doodads will make it look better :/

The terrain is simply put.. Poor... i like that your tried to add a semi-realistic touch to the trees being fallen down, but overall it is flat and terribly chosen models for it, if you are going to use those horribly ugly straight cliffs, then well.... don't use them at all.. make them taller smooth them out some and add a few rocks onto the face of them and the base. Sometimes the best models are the ones that are already available to you, if it were me i would have none of the high-res doodads, seeing as how they ruin the look of it SOOO much... unless EVERYTHING that you have on the screen is high-res which obviously you can't do since the filesize restrictions..

The good thing about the terrain, is your tried to make good terrain although you kinda failed at it... It just takes a lot of time and practice to make GOOD terrain, so it really is no fault of your own. But since i am a terrain nazi, i gave you this extremely harsh review, and hope to see some better\upgraded terrain from you, as you progress through and realize that you can do so much better!

Wow thanks !!!!
you're always giving me a great feedback about the terrain
i'll try my best to fix it