[color=#cc3300]slayer - rpg[/color]

[akatsuki2700]

Story:

A Wizard accidently open a portal to another world releasing many demons and the wizard need to pay back his mistake he made Slayers. Slayers are specialize to kill demons but one day the demons sorrounded eight slayer then tell them they will be not kill if they join them and they will gain more power but one slayer refuse to join the demons but some how two slayers save him and now there fighting for there comrades and the humans who can't defend thereself but most of all for the world.

feed back if it is interesting.

 

[Nudl9]

Umm use another color on the text and the description is pretty short.
Some description about the gameplay would be nice.

Oh and your signature pic is pretty disturbing.

 

[Leeroy]

Professional grammar = professional map. Also my eyes are hurting, change that text color and size. And, yes, your sig is very disturbing.

 

[TheDivineBoss]

Too short.

Too incomplete.

It's better that this thread goes to the Idea section, in my point of view.

No features.

No other essential information.

 

[razorman]

You could make a movie script, interesting...

 

[akatsuki2700]

I'll try I'm not good at english.

 

[gavdaman88]

Ergh....

So basically you want to know if we approve of a story you barely wrote...
Well I like the story at least...