Cliffside Ruins

[johannesr]

This is my first art-terrain. I've only done playable terrain so far.
Edit: Added an updated picture.

 

[arafor]

I like it the water fall behind the bridge looks nice and for some reason I like the trees behind the bridge with the ruin there I dunno it just looks cool. 3/5

 

[Belgarath]

Nice. Simple. Fix up that cliff with some dirty grass or something and use sand on the bottom, add a bit of detail to that sand, and you'll have a wonderful, simple terrain. Nice ATM too.

 

[johannesr]

Nice. Simple. Fix up that cliff with some dirty grass or something and use sand on the bottom, add a bit of detail to that sand, and you'll have a wonderful, simple terrain. Nice ATM too.

You mean like this? And what did u mean by adding detail to the sand?

 

[Megafyr]

Good atmosphere.

You got plenty of space on those cliffs. Maybe put some more rocks there? At least some more shrub 'n stuff. Also I don't think the coral stuff looks good. I suggest you remove it. Maybe lower the ground so the water gets deeper would look good.

 

[johannesr]

Yeah i didn't exactly know what to do with the water so i just put coral there . Also i can't make it deeper with the lower tool for some reason. Which picture is better, 1st or 2nd? So i know which one to edit further.

 

[Megafyr]

I think the first one is the best. Meh.. What you can do to make the water look deeper is placing shadows there.

 

[Ziggen]

Looks good, the main thing I don't like is the rough dirt on the cliffs. Should use something else, something "rocky".

 

[Belgarath]

I meant more variety in the cliffs, not just one line of rough dirt + grass dirt but rather random variation. For the sand, just add in some shells, small shrubs or so. Maybe a few of the green rocks.

 

[Bob27]

Its good, but I agree the cliffs defiantly need some work. Perhaps add some rock spires as well to the cliff, and add some more doodads because at the moment the cliff looks very empty.

Also maybe try adding some more tile variation to the path. At the moment its just the dirt tile and in my opinion it could be really improved with some rough dirt and perhaps some sand.

 

[johannesr]

Updated main post.