Castle

[PrinceYaser]

Castle... , Killing the time...
I love terraining however!

Tell me your opinions guys, they are very welcome!

 

[Naze]

I really enjoyed the composition (where you generally placed the bigger elements like contrasting mountains, lights, the castle, etc), but in minor detail it has inconsistencies. I know this is an unpretentious terrain made for killing time, but you can, for example, avoid floating and repetitive things like these:

Same goes for the other rocks (scaling, orientation, etc) and tile variation. About the castle/cathedral thing I think it is pretty much fine, it had an interesting and believable architecture.

 

[Heinvers]

I can see the inspiration from fladds implemented there. I will just say some things.

• Blizzard water is cancer and we know it since last decade
• Default tiles look odd when mixed with HQ textures
• Seams that are in plain view kill the viewer's expectations
• Depth is an important factor in every terrain

That's all I'm saying. Take what you need from it and further work on this terrain. It reeks of a work in progress, still.

 

[PrinceYaser]

Thank you, guys!

I will fix those issues.

And of course it is inspired by Fladder's terrain.

 

[fladdermasken]

This is my map, except the camera is flipped and you've added some stuff to it.

 

[PrinceYaser]

This is my map, except the camera is flipped and you've added some stuff to it.

Whaaaat?? Did you give your map to me?? I made this by your picture.
Edit:
I can give the map to you if you think I've stolen your work.

 

[Kristopher]

This is my map, except the camera is flipped and you've added some stuff to it.

Look at the castles. Between the middle windows Prince's castle don't have another windows. Your castle don't have columns, that are connected by two large stone bricks etc.
And, of course, Yaser's environment does not look like yours.
P.S. sorry for bad English.

 

[PrinceYaser]

Hey, guys! An update:

New

Old

How is it?

 

[A]mun]

Definitely much better!
1 The statue seems to stare right at the viewer, maybe it's a little too large.
2 You could add some birds, flying about.

 

[PrinceYaser]

Hi!
Second update. Added some better rays of light:

Hidden

P.S. Thanks, A]mun & Kristopher!!

 

[Duke]

This is really nice.

The only thing I would point out is that the bridge is not thick enough, looks a bit like a sheet of paper

 

[Heinvers]

Whaaaat?? Did you give your map to me?? I made this by your picture.
Edit:
I can give the map to you if you think I've stolen your work.

@fladdermasken mainly meant that you too heavy inspiration from him. Almost the same angle and distance, however in a more rough state than his.

Still, it's nice seeing you improving your pieces.