BTNWardenEvasion

[Moderator]

09:34, 4th Oct 2015
Apheraz Lucent: This one requires a little bit more work to get approved. First of all, when thinking of a blur, I personally imagine a very dark theme. The purple haze lines should be removed to achieve that atmosphere, as they only distract the eye from the main object, which is the Warden here.
The shadows should fade gradually, and currently, the middle and last one seem to be of same opacity.
Last but not least, the Warden herself could do some extra touch-ups. She doesn't fit with the sharp and outlined warcraft style, you could try to define her outlines a little bit more and play with the results.

 

[WhiteFang]

This actually looks good.Nice going,you are improving

 

[BETABABY]

This actually looks good.Nice going,you are improving

Thank you so much for that wonderful feedback.

It took me 2 hours to complete the icon.. I'm using a mouse

 

[WhiteFang]

You're welcome

Yeah,I know that can be painfully irritating,I tried making icons before xD I'm actually fascinated with any art but I lack the skill and patience to make my own

 

[Ardenian]

The head feels very small, in m opinion.

Maybe try to make the shape look more natural:

Example

 

[BETABABY]

The head feels very small, in m opinion.

Maybe try to make the shape look more natural:

Example

yeah, the head seems off.

In my first 2 hour attempt in making this icon, everything went perfect but then just when im about to save, gimp crashes.. It was like my soul leaving my body.. So i decided to just made this as fast as i can yet it still took me 2 hours

 

[Ardenian]

2 hours are quite normal for an icon, good icons can take a lot more than 6 hours.

Just take the time

 

[The_Silent]

My only problem with the icon is that the pink outlines look strange, and the most frustrating part is that I don't even know why.

 

[BETABABY]

2 hours are quite normal for an icon, good icons can take a lot more than 6 hours.

Just take the time

I was aiming myself to be more faster at making icons without sacrificing quality.

 

[Ardenian]

I think the glow implies that there is a light source in the background, being deep purple, whereas there isn't such.
I guess you added it to make the shape come out, didn't you, BETABABY ?

 

[The_Silent]

Also, looks like owl man xD

 

[BETABABY]

I think the glow implies that there is a light source in the background, being deep purple, whereas there isn't such.
I guess you added it to make the shape come out, didn't you, BETABABY ?

Yep.

 

[Deleted member 238226]

looks cool actually.

but for me, it's quite blurry.

 

[BETABABY]

looks cool actually.

but for me, it's quite blurry.

I have to work on that.

 

[Blood Raven]

That kinda looks like Javik from ME3 xD
Yeah, doesn't really look like a night elf. The green lips aren't helping.

 

[BETABABY]

That kinda looks like Javik from ME3 xD
Yeah, doesn't really look like a night elf. The green lips aren't helping.

I don't know if you're trolling or not but seriously.. Its far from looking like Javik

 

[WhiteFang]

Actually,now that you mention it BR it reminds me of Javik as well

 

[BETABABY]

Actually,now that you mention it BR it reminds me of Javik as well

LOL.. HAHAHA Well for me it really doesn't look like Javik at all

 

[BETABABY]

Looks good.

Thanks

 

[Ardenian]

The warden looks awesome, but the purple glow, no, just no.

I suggest to try the following:
The first warden is very dark due to the shadow at its right half of the face. If you make the left side of the second warden's face bright, then it should be fine without a glow.

 

[BETABABY]

The warden looks awesome, but the purple glow, no, just no.

I suggest to try the following:
The first warden is very dark due to the shadow at its right half of the face. If you make the left side of the second warden's face bright, then it should be fine without a glow.

Oh.. I'll update it as soon as I can