Bar practice (Bad)

[JarrardKO]

lol only took me likes 10 minutes to write so it's probabaly really bad and doesn't rhyme.

"Mr. Mirror, mirror, standing at the board,
which forum be the best of em all?"
"Well Mr Jarrard, that'd be the Hive for sure."
"Really? Oh, you mean Hive workshop?"
"Yes, be silent now Mr. Jarrard,"
sit tight, be quiet and have some manner!"
Your the student here and I'm the damn teacher!"
"HEY! Right THERE!
Stay down in your seat you misbahaver!"
"Oh sorry, I'm very sorry mister!"
I just wanted to empty out my near-full sharpner,
A thousand sorries, and 3 untouched virgins sir!
"Oh I see we have a class clown entertainer,
I'm guessin you want to pay visit to the office like last semester!"

This is just practice.

 

[UchihaSasuke.gr]

Well....It's good coz it was made in 10 min.But it needed more work.Try adding more words.You are using the same words.

 

[Gausslander]

Say what?! Make it rhyme and this could be on the home page.

 

[JarrardKO]

I thought it the syllables did rhyme. Oh well. Maybe I should make a new one.