I married a whore

[JarrardKO]

Yep, a relationship song. I read a relationship story and I thought the author captured the emotion pretty well. Oh and the language isn't that bad. I just feel it was absolutely NECESSARY in the capturing of the emotion. I hope you understand.

Here goes..


I like skimming your fingertips,
I find it playful and intimate,
And how you gently raise your eye lids,
After we exchange a soft kiss,
And when we lock fingers,
I squeaze them paused in suspence,
Hoping you sqeeuze back in a duplicate sequence,
Openly admitting the we love each other to death,
Gosh.. I just love being so romantic,
You're so.. Beautiful..

...BITCH.

I hate seeing you out and giggling with other men,
SLUT I wish you'd die in a motherfucking serial killer accident,
Bitch I'll do it myself and be charged with homicide murder attempt,
I'll toss you over the pier with your feet trapped in a block of cement,
Because you're too much of an idiot to see their real intent,
To strip you down naked and get inside between your legs,
And talk about that shit all over the internet,
Then brag about it to their aquaintences,
Bitch if you actually speculated and weighed the consequences,
You wouldn't be left isolated by yourself with such a slutty rep,
While having to hide under those bed sheets with pink cheeks embarrassed,
GOD I'm just hoping one day you'd get raped by these so called male "friends"
So you can grope and take full note of the REAL side of them..

And you fucking zealous bitch who the fuck do you think you are?
Plotting to make me jealous, make me watch when he makes you laugh,
You're conducting youself as a slut GOD bitch you make me barf,
You're so much of a whore I'm suprised you arn't diagnosed with SARS,
Moron, they wouldn't even like you if you didn't have such a fat arse,
You fat shit, fucking pig, that weight isn't even human, bitch you from mars?

No please come back.. Baby I'm so sorry I didn't mean it...
I realised how much I valued your love.. Please.. I really need it...
I'm sorry, my emotions overshadowed me.. The truth.. I couldn't see it..
The truth was tightly conceited.. And you kept all those meetings with him a secret..
Because right now I just feel that inside I'm completely defeated..
And my old trust for you is completely.. well depleted..
Argh.. Baby lets just put this behind us and let us hope you never repeat it..
But if you do relive those actions and cut me deep again, I'll fucking cut you up into tiny peices..
.. Bitch.


Lawls. Uhm like I dunno, I'm guessing 20 something minutes was salvaged into devising this.

Comments & Critique are welcome as usual.

 

[brad.dude03]

interesting... although less swearing, and a less controversial concept would have perhaps made this a better song. Regardless, I can feel the angst from here xD