[Bane's Gallery]

[Bane]

Sup guys,
Some would call me a "budding artist" but i find this a rather gay term.
To get better iv been drawing alot anyways ill post my shit here.
(Cartoon style so if you dont want cartoons then.... gtfo?)

1st Drawing (girl with tits)

2nd Drawing (hippo, wtf?)

3rd Drawing (characture of George Bush

Alot more to come,
-Bane

 

[Squiggy]

Lemme comment
I like that comic art in general because it's always funny to see what peoples' fantasy can bring out.

Ciritcism

You shall consider making the lips of that woman a bit thinner, as well as putting some shading into the hair as it looks plain now.
Also, try to round up the left shoulder and make the left arm thicker, align the left neck-side to the right and round up the chin.

The hippo is kinda cool - but I'd suggest to put shading on the side(s) of the fingers since they look like paper now but the rest of the hippo doesn't.

To Bush - rounden up the right ear and.. well that's it

Goold luck with your further art

 

[Bane]

Thank you very much for your critcism squiggy, i really appriciate it.

 

[Nudl9]

I dislike your style, it just doesnt look good.
Suggest you try make it more solid (by using outlines, fill inside and sharp shades shades) so it looks more cartoony'ish.

 

[donut3.5]

I agree with Nudl9, you don't tend to.. how to put it.. draw within the lines when coloring. While the inking does look pretty solid, the colors are fairly messy and unshaded, and lack overall definition. Try using harder brushes, or at least near the edges, then compensate for the hardness of the edges by applying shadowing and highlighting techniques.
--donut3.5--

 

[Bane]

Thanks guys ill take this into consideration on my next drawing.
-Bane

 

[Archian]

It doesn't look like an actual style choice. It looks more like in-experienced hand drawings. With lots of dogde and burn

 

[~Void~]

Nono Archian. I think you got this wrong. It doesn't look like he's inexperienced at all, there is definitely evidence of skill here, it just looks like he doesn't put much effort into anything. They look like WIPs.

 

[Bane]

Void is correct. These drawings took me maybe 10-15 minutes each
This is because i am pressed for time.
Ill take my time on the next one and youll be able to tell the difference.

-Bane

 

[Angry_Bovine]

There's a difference between an experienced artist spending 15 minutes on a drawing (digital or otherwise) and an experienced artist spending 15 minutes. I believe that is what Archian may have been hinting towards?

Quick time aside, you can still tell a little of technique from even quick drawings. I think that you need to practice a little more drawing people, though the hippo fits perfectly with the "cartoony" style.

 

[Bane]

There's a difference between an experienced artist spending 15 minutes on a drawing (digital or otherwise) and an experienced artist spending 15 minutes. I believe that is what Archian may have been hinting towards?

Quick time aside, you can still tell a little of technique from even quick drawings. I think that you need to practice a little more drawing people, though the hippo fits perfectly with the "cartoony" style.

Well that first statement made no sense whatsoever.
You just compared an experienced artist and an experienced artist... the same thing.
And like i said im a "budding" artist and i realize i have to work on my skills.
I was going for a cartoony style that is why the person doesnt look like a DaVinci.
I can draw realistic much better but i am trying to improve my cartoon side.

Thanks for your crits though,
-Bane

 

[Nudl9]

Im pretty sure he meant inexperienced compared to experienced artist.

I can draw realistic much better but i am trying to improve my cartoon side.

Well you need to improve your cartoon style, even cartoon characters need proportions.

 

[Angry_Bovine]

Im pretty sure he meant inexperienced compared to experienced artist.

Yup, I meant that. I sometimes forget what I was typing earlier.

 

[Nudl9]

I read as if u typed that even tho u didnt

 

[ike_ike]

If you do intend to continue in this style, use thicker black lines and 100% opacity brushes for the colouring to give it a more cel-shaded look. At the moment they look really rough. Should you have a tablet, emphasise the line variation more.

 

[Bane]

Okay thanks ike_ike

 

[Devine]

What is this!?
a girl with boobs? no wai.

 

[Angry_Bovine]

What is this!?
a girl with boobs? no wai.

One completely without would be something special.

 

[Nudl9]

Would be a shemale

 

[Angry_Bovine]

Would be a shemale

That's assuming implants don't count. I do believe we are getting off topic now... does Bane have anything else (moar drawings!) up yet?

 

[t3h b055]

nice drawings bane, hippos the best of course.