There's too much evident use of filters, too little is changed, the wrapping (particularly the face) needs some more work and the overall look of it in-game is blurry and undefined.
I like the pockets though, and I guess the idea is OK. You should probably put more emphasis on those tribal markings, as they seem to just be irregularities in shading at the moment, like his skin is bumped in waves. It's hard to get the eyes right on the DH, but take a look at other, approved textures for the DH with eyes and try to make yours similar. You should definitely change the parts you've left untouched, even if it just means making essentially the same thing again, but with your own hands. You have to shade the pants some more and freehand the fabric instead of using filters.
Conclusion: No, this would not be approved.