Autumn Forest

[Deathcom3s]

Yeah, crappy name, but i couldn't think of anything better.

So, this is my first terrain in what's almost been a year (my last terrain was for a contest at Wc3Creations, but that was in like June), so it's not that great, because i just barely started terraining again. Comments are welcome, as usual.

Edit: Added one with a waterfall.

 

[Belgarath]

The grass is goodish, could be better IMO, but it's pretty good. The house and the two trees, left and right, all that's pretty cool. The other trees are cool too, but what's that, sky gaps? /gasp. Those kinda kill the picture IMO>_>. I think all you need are either some fat tree stems or some leaves in those gaps, then it'll be MUCH better.

But for being a year MIA, good job.

 

[Nbah]

Pretty good, for a year. Just change the sky to either fogged, or generic.

 

[Oziris]

The terrain is really good, but the sky! it simply ruins it, and it's flat too...

 

[Celaquil]

Meh its quite nice. Lacking a point of focus though, there seem to be nothing special but grass and trees. And the very idea itself seems kind of used.

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Somewhat to simple. :/

 

[leet.firefox]

Aye, very good indeed. It is a tad simple, and the sky gaps kinda take away from it, but still very good.

 

[Deathcom3s]

Ok, i edited it, tried to get rid of those sky gaps.

Comments, please.

 

[leet.firefox]

Hmmmmm, much better although still a little flat.

 

[~Void~]

That house model is bleh, and the angle you placed it at is even more bleh. A tip: Rectangular buildings always look better from a diagonal, rather than head-on. Why do you think, on the acropolis, that when you walk through the gate and look at the Parthenon, you are staring at the corner? Because this looks better than this. (ignore the fact that one of them is in ruins and the other is a reconstruction...)

 

[Belgarath]

Much better :>
IMO, just the house needs fixing - nothing else that's really bad .

Void, I think i'll just do that for the contest

 

[Megafyr]

Ok, i edited it, tried to get rid of those sky gaps.

Comments, please.

Much better now. I like it. : )

 

[Locked]

terrain is really,nice terrain

 

[~Void~]

I say remove the house and put a new, better-detailed building next to the trunk of the first tree, facing the camera offset by 30 or so degrees clockwise.

 

[Deathcom3s]

Alright, i added another one. It has a waterfall, and that's really all it is. I just felt like doing a waterfall scene, haven't done one since my very first terrain.